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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 22 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2023-10-25 14:48:43 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Thanks, fixt!

Kyllix

Missing word? "Harry and Fudge’s very short-lived had not gotten along well." I like where this is going, thanks for the read.

Osiris Sundavr

The Bone Daddy. Sorry but I just couldn’t help myself.

Dr.Scribe

This is pragmatist harry not dark harry. He knows sleep is important plus which how worn she is even before things kick off and how worn he knows she could get...a slight paradigm shifting nudge is in order. Perhaps a figure she can trust and rely on to have her best interests at the heart (including safeguarding her values of justice) would be just what she needs. Harry disguised or wreathed in shadow interacting with her, telling her she did a good job would do it. Just enough caring Dom/Daddy energy is the source of stability and comfort she needs. Plus that's a different flavor of getting that submission the symbiotic binding needs right? Bella is force, sinestra is teasing and social taboos, Hermione is live and yet to be explored, etc. I guess, thoughts on this Harry being Daddy to the Bones ladies?

RanmaChaos

Looks like sleep is pretty much a guarantee. In that case, I feel like when Harry appears before her this time, he should do something that really wows her. Yes, slipping past her guards is very impressive but it's not really awe inspiring. And I think awing Amelia is gonna give Harry an edge in convincing her to go to bed. I have a feeling she's going to be stubborn about it. It's a shame there isn't more motion around Amelia at the moment, otherwise I would suggest Harry stop time(or at least appear to stop time) around Amelia while they have their talk.

Eric Rudolph

Maybe use some magic to give her a nice dream of her giving up all controll and responsibilities to someone and come back the next morning freash and relaxed to find a new gift on her desk. Maybe some of the deatheaters and spies ( Dumbledore and Tom) in her own department or the flo office or even on Doloris Umbrige. A little tip about some dark objects like a box of blood quills to start an investigation that ends with the discovery of her blackmailing a lot of people and taking bribes...

Osiris Sundavr

It would be best to have her get some rest. That potion might help her in the short run but if she doesn’t get some actual sleep then eventually her decisions will begin to slowly slip. Becoming subpar when she could have instead been excellent.


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