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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 23 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2023-11-08 15:43:52 +0000 UTC

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That black guy

Binding her especially before she can write more scathing notes is imo better but if this is what you all want , so be it

Colin Love

Seems like Harry’s finally made actual progress with Rita but I’m not sure if she’s quite there yet. Perhaps a bit more foreplay before the main event is in order. The real story is this year after all. A great story has the reader on the edge of their seat as the prelude builds toward the main event. They’re left wanting more while getting to know the beloved characters like friends they never knew they had. All before the author leaves them to take the plunge into the main arc. Leaving the thinly vailed innuendo metaphors aside, lol. Turning Rita into an ally loyally working for the cause is much more useful than 10 minions motivated by greed and self interest. I could be wrong though and she may have seen the light and Harry might be able to just bag it and tag it, we’ll just have to wait and see. Good chapter btw.


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