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Coming of Age Ch. 14 (Percy Jackson)

🕑 Added 2023-07-03 14:02:59 +0000 UTC

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matthew t norstrom

honestly? Clarrise is probably learning all sorts of new and exciting things about herself right now, it'd probably be crueler to make her stop even if Perce rebuilds her into something better

Max Turry

Battle maid is really hot and id love to see that hopefully tho she can still be a maid at times even if it loses

Eric Rudolph

I don´like eather of the three options, because nr.1 is wrong in my eyes because it would destroy the character clarisse in the story an is in my opinion more like abuse. option 3 is only in sofern better that her efforts to better herself are compleatly ignored . It is like saying she is worthles and would be like option one. In the second option would the end be a Clarisse who is like a strong and independant comrad where the submissive tendencise that are in the story to see are gone. My preference lies somwhere betwen option one and two, where we have a strong warrior that swears herself tohime in all matters be it being by his side when he fights or serving him out of her own desire be it in bed and out with a vrey clear hirachy betwen the two of them . My best example would be out of the naruto anime the charater conan who became an S-grade criminal and dictated her own live to Pain as a resulz of them saving and helping her.

Haji_Bob

While Battle Maid sounds delightful, building her up, will turn her into a capable, loyal asset. Plus I mean hey, they can still put her in a maid outfit for special days.

Zitronen tee

While battle maid sounds like delicious fetish bait, rebuilding her is the better the option. Even a gal as proud as her will end up somewhat devoted if Percy puts in a genuine effort to help her recover. Option 2 really nets us a similar result to 1, just a more competent but less fetish-y version of clarisse. Who knows, she might end up being into the occasional master/maid play either way. If the week ends up being a weird but positive experience for her she very well might. I'm still hoping for the voyeur Hestia bit though. And option 2 would net FAR better results from that scene. Overcoming differences, reforming the bully and sexy time is pretty much a custom made combo to get that goddess going. Now that I have read the other comments: I want Battle Maid Artemis. But all my ideas on how to get that are absolutely terrible or overused. Most of them both. The one that makes me cringe the least is a twelve labours kind of bet between her and Percy. But that is quite a bit into the future at this point.

Edward Zidd

I’d say help restore her not only to cement her loyalty to Percy, but also that it might, possibly, in some miniscule way mitigate the terrible opinion Artemis is sure to have of him if he can show that he isn’t just taking advantage of his women for his own desires

DualEquinox

As much as I want to turn her into a Battle Maid (and trust me I really want that, maids are very much one of my fetishes), I doubt a Battle Maid will be able to maintain her role as Leader of Ares Cabin properly. A Leader under the thumb is more useful in the long run and offers a natural way to funnel more of Ares's daughters into our budding Harem. Transforming an all-female group like the Amazons, Hunters, Circe's Coven, etc into a Battle Maid Legion (or all of them for more balanced mixed units) sounds more fun anyways. Tbh now I think of it, I wonder whether End Game for this fic will be Percy as Founder, Ruler and (possibly Ruling Deity of a new mixed Pantheon based out of) "New Constantinople" a joint settlement/camp for all the biggest players in the Riodran Verse (Greek, Roman, Norse and Egyptian). From a historical point of view, such an endeavour being attached to that name actually makes sense as Constantinople has at various times been called Byzantium (Greeks), Nova Roma (Roman Empire), Miklagard/Miklagarth (by the Vikings; the Vanagrian Gaurd was made up nearly entirely of Norse and Anglo-Saxons) and was the centre of the Ottoman Empire which ruled over the Khedivate of Egypt as a tributary state.

Bellerophon

Gotta build her back up battle maid is good but battle waifu is better.

RanmaChaos

Arrg, I love battle-maids, but I fear it will have a negative impact on Hestia and other future conquests.

Fenrir44

The 2 option is better we want a lover and compaion not a slave that canont think she has hit her lowerest point whatever she becomes with percy and anabeths help in the 2 choice she will be a great asset and help as a Tank

Phraxius

That's a tough one. I reckon I'll have to go for option one... but battle-maid is a pretty great concept. Who knows though, perhaps he'll do something to make her enter his service with less self-loathing in the future.

Nanaya7Nights

Any good battle harem protag should ensure that his haremettes are at their best ability for when they inevitably will need to fight. On the other hand "Battle-maid". Wonder which will win?

Cambrian

fufufu, I knew option 2 would be more appealing and win by a landslide so I snuck in the 'battle-maid' key word to make the voting more competitive. Can't say the vote doesn't matter this time, it's neck and neck! :P

GalacticTNT

As attractive as the battle maid option is, helping Clarisse become a warrior again will not only ensure that she is stronger than before, it will also cement her loyalty to Percy since he’s the one who helped her. Sounds like a much more appealing option to me.


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