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Coming of Age Ch. 16 (Percy Jackson)

🕑 Added 2023-07-31 13:56:37 +0000 UTC

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boop AGM

I honestly suggest just ignoring the "only three can go on a quest rule" its just kinda dumb, plus it gets undermined in Sea of monsters so much anyway that i wonder why its bothered with in Titans Curse

Darendarus

There's no real way this works out I don't think. There aren't any real good choices here. See ya next chapter!

Dogan

Maybe I'm missing something, but... w̶o̶u̶l̶d̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶P̶e̶r̶c̶y̶ ̶h̶a̶v̶e̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶a̶c̶t̶u̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶H̶A̶V̶E̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶L̶i̶g̶h̶t̶n̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶B̶o̶l̶t̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶ ̶a̶n̶y̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶Z̶e̶u̶s̶'̶ ̶a̶s̶s̶u̶m̶p̶t̶i̶o̶n̶s̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶t̶r̶u̶e̶?̶ ̶A̶n̶d̶ ̶i̶s̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶P̶e̶r̶c̶y̶ ̶I̶N̶ ̶H̶e̶s̶t̶i̶a̶'̶s̶ ̶d̶o̶m̶a̶i̶n̶?̶ ̶W̶h̶e̶r̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶f̶u̶c̶k̶ ̶w̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶h̶e̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶k̶e̶e̶p̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶t̶?̶ ̶U̶p̶ ̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶a̶s̶s̶?̶ ̶W̶a̶s̶ ̶h̶e̶ ̶s̶u̶p̶p̶o̶s̶e̶d̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶h̶a̶v̶e̶ ̶g̶i̶v̶e̶n̶ ̶i̶t̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶o̶n̶e̶ ̶e̶l̶s̶e̶? Does Zeus REALLY think a demi-god as young as Percy could've gotten one over on him? Also, if Zeus DOES think Percy h̶a̶s̶ had the lightning bolt, why wouldn't he send someone to go after him instead of bitching at Hestia about it? Seriously, is Zeus THAT retarded? Edit: Looked at the wiki and apparently he thinks Percy gave it to Poseidon... which clears away that line of question. But still, why wouldn't he send someone to interrogate Percy about it instead of whining like a baby?

Osiris Sundavr

Hopefully Cambrian can eventually dethrone Zeus in this story. He has been a crap “King” and is honestly more a mixture of a manchild and tyrant. About time people start to remember how his father was like and put a stop to him before he becomes just like him. This war with Kronos would make a great reminder.

Zitronen tee

Power fantasy of telling your fuckhead boss your honest opinion and your suspicions that he was born in a zoo. What annoys me is that, yes, Zeus is a dick, but not the dick that counts. Think of Percy's dick and how to get it into a goddess. Strategy people, strategy is what we need. Less Ares, more Athena.

GalacticTNT

I still can’t believe so many people voted to have Hestia blow up at Zeus… ZEUS, the manchild of the childish gods of Greek myth who always has to get his way (or he punishes them).

Zitronen tee

A very hard no there. Keep Percy OUT of the discussion. Direct interference with demigods and quests is more than frowned upon among the gods, but they WILL bend that rule if they get angry enough. Zeus is more than angry enough already. We are miles deep in a hole, stop digging. Make it about interference in others domains. The quest pulls the rug under his strongest card, the suspicion of Percy being the thief and the quest protects him from direct measures. Keep it at that. There is no way to win an argument against the king of the gods. He WILL make your life short and miserable if you annoy him. Hestia is just about safe from his wrath, literally nobody else is. Stop giving him targets.

Zitronen tee

Oh for fucks sake. THAT was what I was afraid of. The obviously terrible choice netted terrible results. The overpowered, petty, childish egomaniac does not take well to insults. Who could have seen that coming? Buuut. Not all is lost. I'm clutching at straws here, but hear me out: Summoning her for a quick dressing down is just about the limit of what even he can get away with. Especially if she was proactive enough to start a quest to get his toy back. Keeping her away from her Hearth out of sheer spite over, essentially, nothing is a huge overreach he can't afford. Hestia will be back within hours, or so I hope. And Cam needs to have a LITTLE mercy here and NOT have the trio get going on the same afternoon, but the next day. If it all aligns, and Hestia had to jump through all those hoops just to keep the Skytoddler happy, she should be just about ready to really blow off some steam by making some very terrible descisions. Impulsive descisions. Hint Hint. If that stupid outburst cost us angry sex with a nicely frustrated Hestia, I will throw something. Working out her frustrations in the sheets would be the perfect scene for her, and god damn I want it.

Gamer

I’m glad you had Hestia stand up against Zeus. With how stubborn, proud, and at times hypocritical he can be, it’s a long time coming. Btw, if you do feature an argument on Olympus involving Hestia and Zeus, not only should she still defend Percy but also point out all the flaws in Zeus’ argument. For instance, that point of Hades seemingly sending a Hellhound against Percy being suspicious according to Zeus? Hestia can point out that Hades might have discovered Percy was Poseidon’s son and may have sent the Hellhound to kill him due to his anger at another brother breaking their oath. Hades did unleash many of the worst monsters from Tartarus itself to pursue Thalia once it was discovered she was Zeus’ kid, the same argument can be used here. And Hestia can once again point out the impossibility and the ludicrous notion that Percy could have done it and gotten away with it since he was aware of his Demigod status for only a few weeks while the Master Bolt was stolen 6 months prior, and said lack of knowledge, coupled with a lack of training or weapons, would have made it impossible for him to infiltrate Olympus and take the bolt, let alone do so and successfully escape before the Gods could notice until it was too late. And also point out that if Percy truly did steal the Master Bolt for Poseidon, why has neither used it despite being one of the strongest weapons of all time? I think you should take both Annabeth and Clarisse, since it will help build relationship development with both, and it would be poetic if Clarisse fought her dad. Maybe when Percy finds Aphrodite’s scarf, she could discover Percy’s connection to Adonis and subsequently be determined to seduce Percy and become one of his lovers no matter what? Plus, I’m kinda curious how certain other goddesses, including Athena, might react to Percy


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