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The Sleeping Dragon Ch. 81 (High School DxD)

🕑 Added 2023-08-21 14:10:15 +0000 UTC

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Colin Peden

I just joined the Patreon, but have been reading this fic for over a year now. I hope we get at least 7 more chapters, with Yasaka having a threesome with Issei and Venelana Gremory. I also think it would be interesting for Issei to change the system and make the angels no longer be fallen or not, but instead all be one family again. Lastly, I think an orgy with all his girls would be awesome. Just some food for thought.

Dogan

My brother in Christ, we're paying money for early chapters for this 'fictional storyline' to dictate where it goes; we're ALL invested in it. As for me being 'a condescending hothead,' the idea that 'Michael was just being a loving, overprotective brother :(' is so painfully dumb that I don't even know HOW you'd think someone wouldn't reply to that negatively. For that matter, YOU replied to me by browbeating some bullshit about how 'people should be more forgiving' and then skirted past what I was even saying to tell me what ISSEI should do. How else should I have replied to someone being THAT demeaning and dismissive of my thoughts? ( ... That was a rhetorical question; please don't give me another sermon.) But hey, now you've turned to him being punished instead of him being 'forgiven,' so... glad to help. Moving on, I never even implied that Gabriel WOULD want Michael dead—just that she wouldn't (and SHOULDN'T) want to mend their relationship after what he did to her, to which you hit me with the ole "holding bitterness and resentment is unhealthy" shit... I digress. I mean, fuck, I even VOTED for Michael to KNEEL, but you somehow came to believe I voted for Michael to ask to die... which wouldn't even necessarily result in him dying anyway—just that he would ASK to be killed, mind you. As for Issei... I honestly can't fathom why he should give a fuck about doing anything 'godly' when he's supposed to be a dragon, but I'll just grant you that he's operating under that mindset suddenly, just for the sake of argument. Though, again, Gabriel likely won't even ask him to be killed anyway, and that's probably still going to be the deciding factor in what happens to him, so... whatever. And you know what? Yeah. That's a decent enough 'punishment,' I guess. I don't know if Gabriel would actually want him to have the same shit happen to him that he did to her, but maybe she would. Hell if I know. And, I don't know about you, but Michael directly enslaving his own family member and thus inadvertently staving off the inheriting of God's throne for... what, literal millennia(?) seems like it would have a LOT of cascading, negative effects, namely a LOT of death and suffering. But sure, let's just say he's not as directly responsible for deaths as Hitler or Stalin... I mean, he wasn't 'ordering' angels to kill people, at least... right? ... Though, he DID 'order' Gabriel into a lobotomy, preventing any new God from taking the throne, so maybe closer to Stalin than... bah, fuck it; who cares, right? 'Big' bro just wanted to look out for 'little' sister but made a few 'mistakes' along the way—end of story, right? ... Whatever. I honestly don't care enough to find out how much of a fuck up in your eyes Michael would have had to have been to deserve to just get killed off for being a worthless piece of shit. But, personally? You're right on the money. I DO think Michael should just be killed for being as shitty as he is, because I don't give a damn about him being redeemed—not even slightly. But I don't think Gabriel would think like that or that he would even ask for it, hence my voting for him to kneel. Though, again, it's still just how MICHAEL reacts, not necessarily the outcome of what happens to him.

Kaijucifer

You're being way too heated about this fictional storyline, I didn't reply yesterday because I didn't want to engage in a hostile discussion with someone who's too busy being a condescending hothead to consider the obvious: character growth, and consistency. Gabriel isn't bloodthirsty. It would be out of character for her to wish death on her brother because of this. She quite literally took the higher road to achieve God's will, why would she wish for Issei to kill Michael, and why would Michael insist on being smited when they both just wanted to go about fulfilling God's will, though Michael never knew what it truly was. Plus, it'd be great for Issei as a Character to not literally give Michael what he wants and killing him, and it would be very godlike to have him learn from his mistakes and be better. It's not like he's Stalin or Hitler. He's still capable of redemption. That which God is best known for: salvation. Furthermore, the punishment would be something incredibly humbling. Such as Michael being forced to live for one million years among humanity to understand them and why God did what he did and why he chose them as his successor. With a catch: he is not allowed to partake in hedonism of any kind, or he will be stripped of his autonomy and sealed like he did to his sister as penance for his presumption on her behalf. A punishment much more fitting for his crime that doesn't unreasonably demand his death as payment, rendering the "punishment" pointless since he wouldn't be able to redeem himself for his actions (again, he didn't do something unforgivable like genocide or subjugation of the masses). Is it wrong to want something hopeful than as bleak as a death sentence? From what I've gathered from this, you would rather him be dead and wash your hands of it which I find to be, narratively, shallow and anticlimactic.

Dogan

Honestly though, "A brother loving his sister too much and wanting to keep her by his side"? Seriously? That's what I would expect MICHAEL to have said to justify it to himself, not a human being looking at what he did. How the fuck do you look at what he did and actually say he was just 'a brother loving his sister too much'? God damn, I'm curious to know what exactly you think his 'punishment' should be if THAT'S how you view what he did. A slap on the wrist? Maybe tell him "Bad Michael" in a reproachful tone? Put a sticker on his shirt that says "Goofy Brother"? Really, tell me: what do YOU think should happen to him as 'punishment' for 'being a loving brother'?

Dogan

Fuck that. I don't care if he lives, but he doesn't deserve reconciliation—not by a long shot. He deserves to be their bitch and ran ragged, wallowing in regret over his lost family, at best.

SpectralTime

...I'm not gonna lie, I'm suddenly tempted to switch my vote in light of that...

Kaijucifer

Glad to see the votes have changed to reflect how it should go. Michael will kneel.

Dogan

Guess that won't be necessary if the current lead sticks... for the next 12 days.

Dogan

Cute sermon, but now you're changing the argument. I said SHE, Gabriel, doesn't need to forgive him, not Issei. Issei can do whatever he wants. Cucking himself down to whatever 'principles' a corpse decided on...? Yeah, fuck that. Unless that chair is going to force him to follow the corpse's principles—and those principles actually align with your little sermon—Issei is almost definitely going to default to Gabriel's wants on how to handle him because SHE was the one who was wronged, not him. I doubt he would kill Michael if Gabriel didn't want him to, and I also doubt he would keep Michael alive if Gabriel wanted him dead. So now, on to the real issue: what the fuck has Michael done to make himself worthy of her "forgiveness"? Nothing. All he did, right now (given the poll stays the same), is give up.(.. maybe. Cambrian said something about mixing the choices, so who knows, but let's operate under that assumption for now.) He enslaved and lobotomized her for god knows how long, plain and simple, and it would have NEVER been "reversed" without Issei, because he thought he was doing it 'for her own good.' But let's assume that Michael DID remove his enslavement, as impossible as that may be. Even that still doesn't "reverse" the damages he caused; it's just the start of 'making up' for what he did to her. "Reversing" this would require him to literally rewind time to the point that he never did any of it... so I don't even know what the fuck you were thinking with that one.

Kaijucifer

Heavily disagree. The world could use more forgiveness these days. Too many people hold grudges for too long these days. All that bitterness and resentment is unhealthy. If the damage is reversible then forgiveness is completely on the table. You can still forgive someone and give them punishment for their misdeeds as God. God hates the sin, not the sinner. Issei doesn't have to be exactly as God was, but he has to retain God's most preeminent traits, and one of them is being the being who offers redemption. Through whatever form that takes.

Dogan

Bleh, screw that. "Forgiveness" can suck a fat one. She doesn't need to forgive him to make use of him.

Aaron Hardin

I kind of want to see a teenage Kunou “seduce” Issei and have sex, in what she thinks is behind Yasaka’s back, but is in fact done with her knowledge when she joins in in the middle of it.

Kaijucifer

Ah so you just happened to be the biggest target for this time's chopping block. Shame.

Cambrian

Nah its all about plausible deniability and making money. By saying they don't allow that content they can have underage users on the website. By welcoming underage users, they can make a ton more money from having more eyeballs on their shitty advertisements that they like to stick everywhere. And all they've gotta do is nuke a smut writer every now and then and they can say they're 'trying'.

Cambrian

If the vote stays this close (currently 41 to 40% as of the time I'm posting this) I'll have to come up with a super special mystery option that mixes one and two I think...

Kaijucifer

Damn lol. FFnet needs to update the site rules to include lewd content on God, they acting like the site would be able to survive without it

Cambrian

Lol, my entire account got nuked off of FF back on August 8th yeah. Admins straight up deleted me off of the face of their website. All of the content on FF (plus more than FF ever had) can still be found on HF and QQ tho. This story in particular can be found on HF, QQ, AO3, SH, and WN heh.

Kaijucifer

But yeah, we need the full 10 chapters, and the story got nuked off of Fanfiction.Net

Kaijucifer

Michael doesn't deserve death for what he's done. A brother loving his sister too much and wanting to keep her by his side is not punishable by death. Worse shit has happened in the Bible, it wouldn't be Godlike to execute Michael. Forgiveness is the way. But only if Gabriel agrees.

Dogan

Honestly, if the story is wrapping up in like 10 chapters, the last thing we'd need is another loose end to think about... Unless "Book 2" comes out at some point, though I have no idea if that's even in the cards or how much there would even be to justify doing that. Either merc him or make him subservient.

Pedro Jose Bello Belen

Pity there’s no option to Genderbend Michael and fuck her silly

DualEquinox

I wouldn't mind seeing a scene where the shift in God's System awoke Runeas from her slumber and she insitigates a Gremory orgy (Her, Rias, Grayfia and Venelana) with Issei upon his next visit.

Jane Sullivan

Katase and Murayama should show up again-they we’re the first members of Issei’s horde we saw, we should see them again before the end.

Cqys

I don't think this Gabriel wants her brother to die. Yea he did some misguided shit but he's redeemable. Also kinda need a known leader.

Bellerophon

Damn people seem to have a murder boner for Michael

Sootythunder

Maybe not 15 maybe 5-6

Sootythunder

You know I really hope to see the final chapter be like a 15 year later thing where we see an adult Issei and his very very VERY large family

SpectralTime

I always liked his sad, tired eyes…

Fenrir44

Christ people are bloodthirsty for Michael's dead just let him bend the knee and reconicle with his sister guys

Shikaze

Michael falls. I mean, you could go for poetic justice and have him fall because Gabriel explains to him in excruciating detail what he had done to her, and to her goal.

Frostcore

Maybe a Gremory foursome with Rias, Grayfia and Venelana? That and more Yasaka. Also would those last chapter also include some of the female characters that haven't appeared yet like Ingvild Leviathan (Issei's Queen later in the Light novels)

Jackson Mccormack

Maybe a scene with Xenovia finally getting pregnant?

Zitronen tee

Micheal becoming the First Fallen of the new Heaven would be kinda poetic though. But it seems to be an unpopular opinion.

Phraxius

Very nice. As for ideas, I'll respond with a question - aside from Gabriel, are there any other hot angels? If yes, there's a great way of signalling the change in management style, lmao.

Nanaya7Nights

Can't see why Michael would resist heaven having a new God. Also, with Issei as God, sins that lead to falling should probably be changed. In Issei'a heaven I would guess that betraying heaven or endangering humanity would lead to falling rather than lusting after someone or having sex with a devil.

Kuroshiki

I really want so see some Gabriel pregnant sex maybe even with her back at being Seraph because it should be in Issei's power to "unfall" her.

Keeper

Hmm, flashforward to a scene with Yasaka and Kunou? Dunno what else to really do. I guess a big family dinner with some of the pregnant ladies setting up the not yet pregnant ones to be impregnated in one night?


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