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The Soul Engine Ch. 4 (Original Fantasy)

🕑 Added 2023-08-31 22:00:03 +0000 UTC

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KOS 1100

Perfect

Cambrian

I've also seen evil souls colored as red once or twice heh

Collar Spider

Fair point, I don't think I've ever made the connection but that does sort of make sense to me. Except for evil souls which are always green, wonder if there's color theory to all that 🤔

Cambrian

I've never played Demon's Souls, but when I think 'soul energy', I think teal. I feel like teal, or blue-white, is what people use to depict the color of souls across a lot of modern media. So that's what I went with, heh.

Collar Spider

Wait, is are the souls teal cause that's what the souls in Demon's Souls look like?

Cambrian

That's pretty accurate to what I'm going for yeah heh. Don't have time for levels and character sheets and skill bloat tbh. Just a simple mechanic to increase his power when necessary and an excuse for why he can fight gud in the form of some serious mental trauma :P

KOS 1100

This is getting good. I love this way more than cheat skills no complicated shit just fighting to live while also on the verge of death every second. This also gives me the vibes of this manwha I was reading of the Undead Gladiator having to kill vampires but has to run off this girl's blood. But anyway love this already super simple and no overpowered shit just hundreds of memories and a soul-eating heart which in short gives him tiny immortality and a power boost in exchange for MURDER. >:) Well that's what I'm getting. :)

Cambrian

Heh yeah, I wanted to do twists on the conventional protag "power ups". So instead of getting a Free Cheat Item and a Level System, Mikael gets a bunch of unwanted memories stuffed in his head and a soul eating device in place of his heart :P

Phraxius

Nice. I look forward to learning more about the characters, the world... and what the Soul Engine can do. Abilities like these are rarely in the hands (or chests, hah) of protagonists, after all!

Cambrian

Funny that you call Avina a Necromancer... :P

Godzilla511

Can't wait to see if there are any other enhancements to Mikael's body. Necromancers love enhancements. "Upgrades people! Upgrades! Thats how we make the dough!" -Phineas T. Ratchet

Cambrian

Glad to hear it, hope I continue to impress!

Kaijucifer

I didn't see the warcraft one because I didn't know anything about warcraft and didn't want to participate in something that would only leave me with more questions lol, but yeah, if it's less smutty and horny than breaking providence I'm good with that lol! I like this one a lot more so far

Cambrian

Only nine sex scenes in the entire story, so yep, should be fewer and far between in this fic compared to most of my other work. Maybe a bit more smutty/horny than A Savage Nature, but definitely less smutty than Breaking Providence.

Kaijucifer

I hope the sex stuff is fewer and far between in this story. I rather like this as it is, the sex would be better as a bonus imo lol. It must be earned!

Darendarus

It's likely given his resolution to not die again. I just wouldn't be comfortable with having to take from others in order to not die. Being turned into a parasite is not a situation I'd personally be ok with. I do hope he goes far though. He's in this situation now and there ain't much he can do aside from press forward and make the best of it given his resolution.

Cambrian

Heh, I think he's happier to be alive then you would be in his situation, tbh.

Darendarus

I'm just hoping that he fully takes her to task for her actions.

Cambrian

You'll have to tell me what you think of his approach next chapter. I will say I don't feel like he softballs here, but I'm also not sure he'll go as hard on her as you might want :P

Darendarus

He'd better not go for the soft approach when interrogating her. She turned him into a zombie parasite so she owes him.

Jack Reaver

That's fine, Avina'll patch him up lol

Cambrian

Heh, five updates a week is the plan, so we're one chapter away from our first weekend break. And you're probably not wrong, except that him showing up alive again in the arena might bring the hammer down on him, pfft.

Cambrian

He's in a pretty bad state tbf. His mind is still really screwy. But not to worry, killing three dudes should sober him up quickly enough right? xD

Cambrian

Glad you're liking her. It'll be super fun to explore her background more as the story progresses, hehe

Jack Reaver

Spoiling us with these updates. Avina is already best girl imo, and I get the feeling that if Mikael goes back to the pit, he isn't leaving in a body bag again.

Mask

Man, MCs attempt to garner sympathy made me cringe. His misjudging the room, too.

GalacticTNT

Avina seems interesting, wonder why she’s working with these lowlifes? Especially with the personality she’s been shown to have. Looking forward to finding out!


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