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The Soul Engine Ch. 7 (Original Fantasy)

🕑 Added 2023-09-05 22:00:02 +0000 UTC

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KOS 1100

Noice 👌

Cambrian

Hah, well he'll be fighting in at least one more arena before all is said and done...

Cambrian

Good catch, fixt!

KOS 1100

Hm, ngl want Mikael to fight in some areas that Zadicus doesn't check and get his skill up and power up the Soul Engine.

RHar

3 More chapters to go until all this meaty exposition gets some sauce! Also, I caught a typo at some point where Thayla calls it the Kingdom of Alether rather than the City of Alether or the Kingdom of [I don't remember and I can't scroll up on my phone while writing comments].

Cambrian

Hmm, I wonder~

Phraxius

I wonder whether Zadicus can do something useful with fragments of Summoned Hero memories. Recreate tech from Earth? Nab arcane secrets from other worlds? Use them as inspiration for his paintings? (What, even murderous oligarchs need hobbies.)

Cambrian

Thanks! And not to worry, the pace isn't going anywhere (I've actually already written up to chapter 14, lol)

Kaijucifer

Good world building. Keep this pace up!

Cambrian

Excellent~

Cambrian

Glad to hear it! Yes, Thayla and Avina are pretty major characters and will be getting close to Mikael over the course of the story. So I sure hope I do a good job of making them likable... and if not likable, hopefully redeemable in the long run heh

Nanaya7Nights

I am always interested in the background of your original fantasy free writes. Looking forward to seeing what the summoned hero's role is in this world.

Jack Reaver

I don't mind the exposition, it helps with world building. I'm excited for the inevitable harem because so far the most likely members are very likeable


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