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The Soul Engine Ch. 10 (Original Fantasy)

🕑 Added 2023-09-08 22:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Well yes, there are three main girls in this fic. And yes, only one girl besides Thayla and Avina has been introduced at this point. Ergo... :P

McGrundy

BIG TIDDY ORC WAIFU. LETSFUCKINGGOOO 🥵

McGrundy

I didn't miss the fact that you said "All of the girls have been introduced, albeit SOME more than others." Which indicates that there's more than the two...

Cambrian

Glad to hear it and glad you like em! Hope I continue to impress~

JRC

Gee, I'm glad I finally got around to reading Soul Engine, it's very good! A bit of a shame I missed seeing all of the pictures, but I understand the decision to pull them. Plus, I greatly enjoy how similar Avina seems to Winter Schnee! Thayla is really good too.

Cambrian

Good, gooood. I'll just have to hope I can make you feel the same way about Thayla xD

KOS 1100

Avina is waifu material. I love her already.

RHar

I wish I still had your AI CG reference for Avina. I can still remember Thayla's, but I never got to see Avina's

Cambrian

Indeed, Avina has clearly spent way too much time in isolation~

Phraxius

Very nice - and yeah, cutting into bodies in a basement definitely sounds like lonely work.

Cambrian

A fair critique. But tbf, I was inspired by Baldur's Gate 3 and the speedrun to sex with a companion in that game HAS been knocked down to 2 min 4 sec soooo :P

Kaijucifer

Small issue is that they're having sex and it's only been a few hours since they met officially lol. I would have waited a bit more personally.

Cambrian

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

RanmaChaos

Thanks for the great chapter!

Cambrian

Yep, gonna be posting it on Royalroad and Scribble Hub too, which are two websites that allow both original and fanfiction but are more geared towards original, so I'm hoping I can break into those audiences a bit more!

Nanaya7Nights

I'm liking this story so far. As for the public release, it should have a positive reception. It is a take on the isekai genre, which is quite popular. Of course it will have the pros and cons of an original story. On one hand, people who are only interested in specific Fandoms might skip it, on the other, your characterisations & world building aren't bound by any pre-existing Canon so no one is likely to complain at the moment.


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