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Such a Chad (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2025-02-14 16:35:08 +0000 UTC

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Hadrian v.E.

There needs to be a prequel!

Mariano Amar

I was thinking along the same direction. This sounds like something that would have been better as a, maybe 6 shot short story? One for the initial setup, one for advancing the plot, three more that keep moving the plot while having smexy times (one per girl "attempting" to convince him?), and a last chapter to wrap things up? Maybe a seventh just to split the wrap up between plot and resolution?

Pure Dingo

It was good sex-wise, but it needed more chapters to get into it, maybe a chapter for each trying to get into his good books for their own reasons before he sees how far he can push them. For me the ages didn't sell it, they needed to be 18 for this kind of thing not 23. That was why I felt they didn't fit the mold of the HP characters just people with their names. Aging the characters up changes many things as they have time to mature, as well as have other things happen to them that influence them into different people. But that is just me, other than that it was a good HP story and I look forward to more.

just_some_guy99

Loved this!

Toru Jack

Nice one 👌

Erinnyes

Solid, as always. The appropriate bits and bobs are all there and present, but it didn’t feel as inspired as most of your works do. I think that the various story elements all needed more space to really get the reader invested, which is hard in a one shot. Good work, it suffers mostly by comparison to your truly excellent other works. 😁

That black guy

Harry walking down the halls https://youtu.be/Hh5jEQraXaw

McGrundy

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