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A Play For Time Ch. 4 (System Apocalypse)

🕑 Added 2024-10-28 01:19:12 +0000 UTC

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RanmaChaos

Thanks for the chapter.

Cambrian

Not replaced lol. The first chapter of this story was written back in August. The first chapter of Calamity's Champion was written more recently, but it didn't click with me so I found myself coming back to this idea.

AtsiaZ

Ah, It seems I missed the original chapter 1 getting replaced. Was wondering where the "rogue system player" plot was. Still interested in this, but a bit sad that plot died before it started.

jacques

Absolutely loving this so far!! I commented on the original chap when it dropped and was sad to see it go. WE BACK!

BlindOracle

Kyle has to be pissed enough to start showing cracks in his mask. I'd love to see Theresa start to have doubts. Does the system have coin drops, an auction house, or secret npc shops in a dungeon?

Kael Hyun

I'll be honest I liked the forum posts because it kinda reminds me of 4chan posts. All that's missing is single line posts calling it "fake and gay".(Sure you kinda got close with the debate but I still imagine that there would be still one channer that would default to that response type.) Would also be nice to see Caleb show up in the Forums version of Green text like he's an urban legend now that he's moving from graveyard

RHar

Not to get political, but I feel like a certain President's POV could be fun, soon.

Phraxius

"Human warriors are known to perch atop their fallen foes and repeatedly press their genitals into their faces in a crude display of power and virility. They further demean the dead on both sides with statements such as 'gg ez'."

Cambrian

"So many dead... what is happening over there?" "The humans are not like us. They do not feel compassion or kindness as we do." "Surely you exaggerate!" "The System has compiled an aggregate of the most common response towards requests for assistance." "And?" "Nine times out of ten, the answer boils down to 'git gud'". "... how barbaric."

Phraxius

Regarding the rising death toll, it would be ironic if the System wasn't meant to be that lethal, it just pulls on local media - and somehow, tragically, Dark Souls got added to the mix. Cue that Powerpuff Girls creation meme.

daniel riggle

neat. yeah that's a good reason not to focus on Caleb's pov for now.

Kind

I'm always a sucker for multiple POVs, especially when the MC is just grinding. Fleshes out the world better, more dialogue & just fun all around. It's pretty difficult for authors. Though Cambrian, you seem to do fine!

MercerV12

Enjoying the story so far, looking forward to more!

James R

I just want to say I'm so glad you decided to pick this up again, I loved the first chapter you put out and was bummed you weren't going to continue it so glad you got some inspiration!

Sith2go

Caleb is playing the world with the efficiency of a highly skilled Stardew Valley player.

TheSinful

Tbh, that's most multiplayer RPGs. Mage at level 1: Die. Mage at max level: Kill everything. Almost said most RPGs in general, but then I remembered that mages in Fable plateau pretty damn early.

Cambrian

In all fairness to 1111, he's right that time travel definitely breaks the System a bit. Almost as though there might be some safe guards in place that could be utilized to prevent high level Chronomancers from traveling as far back in time as Caleb did. But then, those safe guards would probably be locked behind Triumvirate Level System Access... :P

Cambrian

The entire concept for this story started out as a thought experiment on how I could turn the whole WoW Mages being OP at AOE leveling into an actual fic lmao.

TheSinful

Wait til he learns Priests can rez rather than just use Cure Light Wounds

TheSinful

Darn. My title didn't make it. But I see Caleb is being the dudes who go for World First in WoW and the strategy is always "Be mage, spam AoE on weak enemies for 47 hours rather than quest for 50 hours."

jp9901

I'm more invested in how Caleb will use Time Magic. Strong, broken magic is only cool when its fun

Cambrian

that's a good point, yeah, might play around with that idea

Cambrian

heh glad to hear it

Cambrian

good catch, fixt!

Doug Bowman

Full chapters of Caleb's POV may not be ideal, but he's still the protagonist of the story. A blurb at the beginning or end could go a long way in that regard. For instance, after this chapter if Alice decides to build a faction of mages that use his leveling method that would be a well-built development. Explaining the "exploits" he uses can also just build the world such that other exploits can be more easily justified depending on how competent/corrupt you're wanting the admins to be. He also provides a wider perspective, if you want to use the message boards along with his advanced perspective to reflect on the actions of the previous chapter. He has a good ability to get to 100, but ruling the world is a very different animal. Unless he's just going to murder Kyle at level 99 and let the rest fall where it may. Not to mention that everyone else should be too busy trying to be strong enough to be important to troll the forums, so they wouldn't know about rising and falling factions unless one of them decides to be a faction leader. Or latch on to a faction leader.

Mask

I like the forum, it can be very entertaining to read the reactions of netizens

Mike

He donned the robes, not dawned them

Mask

1111457634, you really think no Chronomancer could ever time travel? Wow, talk about a lack of imagination. You do realize that just because you’re level 2 and casting Slow doesn’t mean that’s where it ends, right? High-level Chronomancers can bend time in ways you’d need a brain cell or two to even understand. But I get it—thinking isn’t exactly your strong suit. Keep doubting, though; the rest of us will be laughing when you’re still stuck with your little “reflavored Arcane Missile” while real Chronomancers are rewinding time.


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