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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 55 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2024-11-06 16:09:18 +0000 UTC

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Trav

very glad to see the vote ultimately went the way it did. Time is short for Harry. Plus damn, how can you not love the idea of bringing Amelia into the fold

Rhett Rayos

I mean, really, what was Apolline expecting to happen when she tried to forbid her of age daughter from doing anything? The fact that she went over Fleur's head and convinced Harry not to go through with it is only going to make this attempt of hers backfire.

Alun Lewis

And that's my hope for this story's version of Fleur...she'll try and seduce Harry into breaking his promise to Appoline, get shot down (but in a way where Harry can defuse any potential schemes to undermine Apoline's conditions for binding herself), and agree to wait until certain events happen.

Nanaya7Nights

Honestly this Fleur seems to be more likely to try to seduce her way into getting Harry to bind her and ONLY escalate if that doesn't work.

JRC

I admit, reading the comments convinced me to change my vote. I was actually gunning for option 1, at first. But I found myself agreeing with several reviewers, Harry doesn't have time to micromanage Amelia on top of everything else he has going on and Minister of Magic is a pretty damned important role for the "team".

Alun Lewis

Harry spilling all the beans to every member of his coven - at least right now - is a dumb decision, but even more so than Appoline, Harry is going to need key players being on basically the same foot as him when it comes to knowledge of the impending apocalypse to serve his needs in heading off the death of magical society. So Amelia needs to be read in about everything necessary to Harry's plans so she can be proactive in putting his agenda into action. On the matter of Appoline's confrontation with her eldest daughter? She definitely could have handled things better, which is a sign of Cambrian writing a believable moment of character failure since its something a mother would do to keep her daughter "above" the sketchiness of what Harry is doing (even if it's for good reasons). I just hope there's a resolution before Fleur does something boneheaded in spite....like contact her grandmother and her veela clan under the auspices of being worried something has befallen Appoline, in the hope of getting her mother out of the way long enough to get Harry to bind her.

SaintMichael95

It's not really a problem and I never said it was, so I'm not really sure why you're acting like I did, or focusing on just that one thing, but okay. I just think it doesn't make any sense to keep his identity secret from Amelia, that's all.

Devon

She COULD figure it out. If she WANTED to, though, she almost certainly would have already

Devon

Yes. Why is that a problem? I mean, Amelia will amost certainly figure it out... if she WANTS to. But far as I can tell, she LIKES the mysterious but reliable act.

SaintMichael95

I personally don't think option three makes any sense, narratively speaking. Why would he tell Amelia less than he told Appoline, when Amelia has such a more important role to play? Why keep his identity secret when Tonks already knows? Not to mention Amelia is probably a lot more perceptive than Appoline, she'll probably figure it out soon anyways. At this point, I feel like people only want to keep his identity secret for kink reasons, and that this is one of those cases where, since the results are so close and the options so similar, the author can choose which one to go with based solely on which one makes more sense for the narrative.

Captain Hair

Harry is already courting her both for the coven in secret and politically in public. Keeping the two separate only adds complications to an already complex situation.

SylverIron

....people that voted for 3; are your forgetting she's goddamn law enforcement? She'll figure it out.

DualEquinox

I think 4 is the way to go. Harry is not going to be able to micromanage a minister of magic, there just isn't enough time in the day to do so. To do her job the way Harry wants she needs all the information necessary to run interference for Harry (which requires knowing his identity) and put in policies designed to prepare for the future (which requires knowing about the decay of magic). Telling her about the time travel is necessary to give legitimacy to his claims as it is the easiest way to prove the decay of magic (via proving he has future knowledge).

RanmaChaos

Im glad were telling Amelia everything, but why hide Harry's identity at this point? Seems like this is the moment to do it.

redhawktiger

Funnily. I see Fleur doing something rash to force Harry to make her a part of his coven, though what that could be I have no idea, just to spite her mother.

Rotaugur

I am still not convinced , it was a good idea to include appoline into th coven. Her role is irrelevant, and i have the feeling, she is only includet to have two veela bound. Giving amelia the infos of the future but not his identity is just going to cause problems. She has still not ask him to reveal himself herself, and then just dumping an impossible story on her without proofe cant end good. Has she even called him master jet? Or has she admittet to herself, that she wants him to be her master? I have the feeling, informing her of the possible future is going to force her to hasten her developement, and that will ruin the beautiful relationship, that is growing between them. The only possible way i can see with option three is, for harry to just inform her that he is from a future where magic is dead, and that he cant reveal more to er for the time being, without any details. Otherwise, she could start to ask questions and come to false conclusions or get the feeling , he pressured her into becoming his, and that would ruin ther relationship.

Nanaya7Nights

Why though? Why tell her the truth but hide his identity? Unless he feels that she isnt ready to be bound to him.

Nanaya7Nights

Not if he can get her to bind herself to him.

Nanaya7Nights

I am all for four as Amelia would want to keep Susan safe and magic dying is detrimental to that goal.

Erinnyes

Very tough call between 3 and 4.

Nat

Nah. Amelia doesn't want to be minister. She deserves to know the truth before committing to a job she doesn't want

Belly

Nice, but yeah... I don't like Apolline right noe eith her controlling behavior snd weak ass excuse. She forbidden Fleur? And she basically is telling her what to do and not to do and it's implied that Harry is just agreeing with her? What happened to the dominating Harry who doesn't take crap from anyone and will negotiate everything in his favor? Or does Apollone think just because she binded herself to Harry she gets a say on who he binds or not? Great chapter but the last interaction and explanation wast meh.

Neolibwill

It’s a tough choice between 3 and 4. On one hand, having the members of his coven all have different levels of information is just asking for trouble. But on the other hand, revealing who he is the the future minister of magic could really complicate things.


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