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The Ghost King (Danny Phantom/DC Comics)

🕑 Added 2025-01-17 17:42:38 +0000 UTC

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Alun Lewis

Hmm...gotta join the mob and lament that you gave us far more than we asked for but not enough to really flesh out the prompt. But fair is fair...you've been clear these poll winners are 2500 words only, so being conscious of how "big" our prompt ideas are is something that we need to practice lest we get hooked on a rare dish 😉

Belly

Also feels like an actual story he could've wrote with 40+ chapters. Kind of neat if instead of starting with an origin or "beginning", it starts at thr "epilogue" lol.

redhawktiger

Not bad, but this feels more like a part 2. It is the prompts fault, and your readers for voting for it (something I admit to being guilty of doing). Really wouldn't mind seeing a prologue prompt detailing how Danny and Cass meet, as well as why she left Batman behind.

Just_Call_Me_Steve

I'm going to have to say that this does feel like something that needed more build up prior to this exact chapter.

Thereader

Thanks anyway love the chapter its unfortunate but it is what it is. Thx for the reply love your stories (smut or not)

Cambrian

Nope lol, it would have a Pt. 2 on it if it was. This is standalone. This is what happens when someone wants to submit a plot-heavy prompt to the prompt polls and you guys vote for it. Poll Winners are only 2500 words, so what you see is what you get.

Thereader

I feel this could be a continuation if am right what is the previous chapter name.


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