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[Supporter] Newlywed's New Desires Ch. 22

🕑 Added 2025-11-05 18:36:40 +0000 UTC

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Czoftw

Ashley's one of my favorite heroines. She's strong and weak all at once and I love that duality. She and Chris have made some bad choices but I want to see the two of them with a happy ending.

Czoftw

OK, I'm late to the party having just joined after following on Literotica but fuck Clayton. That asshole should not get off lightly and sail into the sunset with Ashley. He's a piece of shit who has run this con a number of times before and it's time to pay the piper.

Mad Stories

I will say, the janitor had a MUCH smaller role in this before you all started chiming in :) He was a fan favorite for sure

Chris N

I think she looks for any reason to justify her shit and take away the blame from her. She’s officially worse than Wendy in my book. I hope Chris and Katie end up together and Clayton goes to jail to devastate Ashley. Tom takes her and just makes her the company slut. Katie and Chris live happily ever after lol. Also I hope you can bring the janitor back into this please. He deserves to have her too lol

Chris N

Also I’ve been thinking this has nothing to do with your writing or a negative comment toward you. I really dislike Ashely now. Before it was just Clayton but now I can’t stand her either.

Chris N

I’m really sad about the janitor he was the unsung hero of the story

Mad Stories

I appreciate the kind words and the feedback. Sorry, this didn't have the outcome you were looking for. Perhaps the next one will :)

Robert zigzag

Did you just ruined a plot with janitor ? Why ? It was great. I had such high hopes for this story, which I really find great, but then the plot with FBI started ruin the fun. It`s boring and distracting. This story could be perfect if you just stick to Ashley hotwife journey and exploration with her sexuality with more than 1 man, , women, orgies, janitor, black guys etc. I hoped the older woman would be her mentor and even she (in my "version" she is 60 something - Persia Monir pornstar type of look) would introduce Ashley to female sex - again sexy contrast between young and mature. But still appreciate your writing skills and effort. You`v got talent that`s for sure.

Maddog

Glad to be here

Mad Stories

Stick with it til the end. :)

Maddog

Great writing as always clay but Ashley is turning into a cock drunk bimbo and if that's how the story is going to end I don't think I want to read the other 2 chapters