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Seduced by Salvation - Complete Story

🕑 Added 2025-11-26 13:36:33 +0000 UTC

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Marlberg

One request Clay. Some of us dont see that good on an S23+ Screen. PDF is fine but increasing font size of base published document would help these old eyes

NightSoulvane

I loved this story when it was first released. That struggle to save his love before all hope is lost was so well written. Shifting the epilogue to more directly emphasize the Father's continued influence feels a bit more fitting than the original. Hinting at how things will eventually end up between Amanda, David and Emily seems more impactful. Outside of Grace, Jacob was the only real individual to take a stand in what was happening and the original epilogue kind of cut him off at the knees.


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