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V6: Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2023-12-30 02:36:30 +0000 UTC

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aj0413

Man, Celia playing hard to get. Basically, just “Omg, he’s too perfect and handsome and idk how to handle it!?” Also, I just realized: doesn’t Jack pretty much embody the phrase ‘Smiling Tyrant’ as the King of Wisdom? Is he low key being worshiped as a ‘god’ or something by the cult? Lol

Sage_Of_Eyes

Thanks for reminding me. Fixed.

arde645

Just a couple oopsies, one near the end of Celia's section; "I would have seen Lich ravage" Missing a "the" before the Lich. The other at the start of Jack's section talking about his Conquerer cannoneers; "We now had Conquerors who could handle the cannons that could handle the ‘small arms’ produced by the Citadels." Probably a mixing of two versions of the sentence you were debating between. Anyways, great chapter and it's nice to see the Conquerer's being integrated into Jack's forces so quickly.

Joseph

I thought poison was underpowered in the game

Zarik0

Letsss gooo xDDD I want so much more chapter of this story, i get a very good reading moment each time one get updated :)

Da_Avid-Reader

War crimes are a go go go


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