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V11: Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2025-07-28 15:22:48 +0000 UTC

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Ollie Fairweather

No new chapter this week?

dad

I'm just scared of what Morgan is gonna do to Celia at the end of Celia's hopeless and unnecessary campaign. She's basically a living testament of everything Morgan hated about the divided world right now.

Zarik0

"The only thought that remained in my mind was, how could anything hope to surmount such a ferocious barrage? … Damn, I really need bigger artillery pieces. Having the anti-tank guns double as field artillery was good on paper, but this whole battle would’ve been over if I could make howitzers." Never stop to entertain to see the difference of view and though of Jack vs all others on things, as Jack know what is coming and needed, and its needed way way more and its not enough at all Would have been a so neat scene to have Jack mumble things and so 'create' and share the idea of Mortars (new weapon and paradigm change) just here, him asking to take some notes and start search if possible to do it, (a tube and so easy to be moved by few people and etc and some explosive/rocket is launched with it and go parabolic attack with) And all people around him are dumbstruck how a guy can come with things like that and like this, an 'entire new things' (and op one who can change everything) when he is just looking at the battlefield and analizing things/pondering and so get 'inspiration'/get thought on things, people would be just aaaaa brain melt over it looking at it and hearing his mumble and see him asking to take some note on a 'new' idea he just had (and realize its just bonker idea if it can be done) The scene and maybe Pov of others or atleast show/tell the reaction of them over it would have been banger to read it xD


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