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V12: Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2025-09-15 18:19:12 +0000 UTC

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Deathwings500

>“Of course, my lord.” Khalai smoothly answered and stopped in the middle of crossing her legs. Freudian slip or actual mistake on your part ?

Mark

You know what would be dope as hell a stellaris version of this

Responsible Person

Patience m'boy, all in due time

BlackFlame Lord

Ooh man, I wanted Jack to get the third tatoo from the war goddess and complete the trifecta of goddess tatoo collection, now it feels incomplete..

N U

A) Because bringing back other races with their minds wiped requires Tier 3 Cathedral. B) No because the cost of getting him back is unleashing the twink. That's the trade off. C) It's not taboo now that the Wardens have been gutted. If they were still a force, having people flood to them would be a problem sure, but they're on their last legs and like Morgan and Sirena discussed, Jack's population is LAVISHLY devoted to him and his nation. D) The only people who would believe him are his people and they don't need to be convinced that Paradise isn't worth it.

SlanneshSoldier69

The fanatic wouldnt believe that.

Zarik0

Im still wondering wtf Mc not use the final stick against the warden shit. Mc to Khalai: "You are a fool Khalai, you wish to murder everyone so they can reach Paradise, but did you even know what Paradis is? Its the Rest Stop for soul between life and mortal coil that the Ancient BUILD, yes khalai BUILD, Its a mortal creation, and what was BUILD and Created can be DESTROYED, you wish to force everyone into it, fool, if you succed we will just be powerless waiting people who can do nothing except wait for the inexorable ennemy, Paradise can be breached, and the ennemy know it and will never let us go, it will take time, maybe thousand of years for them to succeed, but the ennemy will breach paradise and destroy it and us at the end, as we sit into it powerless to do anything as we are prisoner of it like lamb waiting for the slaughter and the butcher knife coming" No seriously why Mc dont say the info, he know of it for sure with the lore and etc, Paradise is a construct with a anchor or etc in the material realm and so it can be breached and is not secure moreover if nobody stay and defend it in the material realm

Roughstar333

I did not expect khalai to return, but it made sense. You are a lucky man, Riegert.

momo2009

So why can't jack researched or used resurrection by himself or used a loyal dark elf instead of the genocidal leader? What was the point of wiping out the dark elf clergy if now you intend to used the resurrection power when someone important dies? Won't the guy coming back be mind washed to follower the the dark elves vision of killing everyone? and doesn't it removed the last chapter sacrifice? And if the whole everyone is getting into paradise suppose to be taboo why isn't jack shutting down the news from spreading or why kill so many other warden before? And if the news is spreadng now why not spread the truth that Paradise can be attack from the outside thus everyone going to Paradise isn't a safe place.

darkmuch

One of the things I love about this story is how well the pacing is maintained. So many other stories I'm reading would have milked this character death across multiple POVs reacting to it. Sage jumps right to the hard hitting discussions and ramifications. No fake tearjerkers. No waffling around questioning what to do. It doesn't even feel like a timeskip, just the natural progression of events.

aj0413

Khalai gonna ask for a kiss ain’t he?


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