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🕑 Added 2024-06-28 17:15:20 +0000 UTC

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Chase

I read this as an over the pond accent more than a typo

Vincent Sloan

Great chapter, I like you showing the evil of these kinds of power. I don't like when the effects persist for an arc though that's too disconcerting for me. Good job!

Vincent Sloan

Edit suggestions: "from a all the directions." From all directions.

Ace

Thank you!! Small typo says “fucking with me head” instead of “my head”. Great work

Chase

I actually loved this!

Gabriel Melnik

To be honest it was kinda good. More Psionic abilities, spells and segments like this could pair really well with how materialistic has been Ethan's development.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. I appreciate that. Mind control BS, is BS very hard to write well, at least for longer than short stretches of text.


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