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The Scales of Time Chapters 3 and 4

🕑 Added 2024-01-27 18:30:01 +0000 UTC

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BS Writer

Thank you. I felt that narratively it was important for Eloise to go down early because it shows reminds Julie, and the reader of what's at stake. It shows that even the presumably popular ones can be beaten. And it gives Julie an opportunity to use the watch and get a bit of revenge against a minor antagonist before she has a prolonged standoff with Vivian. Another reason for this is because I wanted to sneak in more fat talk and another heavy fat description scene since I wasn't getting to the challenge with Vivian yet and I did a lot of world building/ exposition with Sabrina this chapter and Julie's mother in chapter 2. It's the same reason I through in a dream sequence. I hadn't done a fat transformation in a while, so I wanted to put it in here for people to enjoy. I'm glad the blonde intrigues you. It's always good to know when introducing a mysterious character that people care about knowing who they are and what they're doing. I know there's a payoff, and I hope it will be worth the wait and enjoyable.

Searcher

Great chapter. Interesting. Had an idea it would happen but I didn't think Eloise would fall so fast. This blonde girl you keep teasing intrigues me.

BS Writer

Thank you. Eloise really became a much bigger part of the story than I intended. I mean, obviously I meant to make her big. I just thought when I sat down to write it that it would be sort of a quick scene tacked onto the end of the chapter. But it really took on a mind of its own.

KAzul

This is just wow. Really enjoying the sights of other games and I never expected these many characters to be introduced. Really interweaving an expansive story!


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