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"Fat Trimmings" Volume 22 - Sequels Galore

🕑 Added 2024-05-07 22:52:05 +0000 UTC

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Silver Star

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Silver Star

The beach one reminds me of this

Wilbo

I really enjoyed "Mermaid or Manatee?". This was a nice fresh take on the Munchies too.

BS Writer

Thank you. Sometimes it's a lot of fine to go write something that is a sequel to smaller things. I like to reward longtime readers for that.

BS Writer

Thank you! I enjoy using the Munchies as this interesting thing where they break in and out of the fourth wall being characters in the story and the narrator. And they're fun to write. I also enjoyed writing the story about Janey's mom.

Searcher

This is probably the best Use of the Munches i've seen in a long time. I have grown tired of them but this story was done in a fresh way. I Liked it.Janey's mom going from outspoken critic to face Stuffing food addict was great too.

KAzul

I love that you're making a bunch of continuing threads with things like Thick Burger and the Notebook. Really makes me excited whenever I see either of them pop up! Also really adoring Mermaid of Manatee. Always fun to catch up with a beached cow, struggling with her new life and accepting her new place. Fun stuff!


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