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The Reunion - Revised (Colour Corrected)
🕑 Added 2021-03-17 06:39:32 +0000 UTCHEY EVERYONE - firstly thank you all for showing da love for the continuation of The Reunion, I'm glad you guys are interested in the story!
I have a tiny favour to ask. Y'know after sharing the post on here yesterday I was looking at it and somehow the overall aesthetic didn't sit well with me. I think part of the reason is just me not being fully satisfied with the way I draw people (though this will always be a WIP), but another thing I figured could be my use of colours. There's just so much saturation, I think too much of it can be a little unpleasant to look at when it's a series. There's this thing called eye strain xD I recall reading it somewhere by a comic artist who commented on how he picks his colour, so I wanted to try adjusting the colours on mine.
Normally I wouldn't really share my revisions but this one is kind of more obvious and it does somewhat change the overall mood of the comic. It's less orange, I added a "moody" feel to it and decreased the contrast so it looks "flatter", which I think sounds negative but aesthetically I kind of dig it. I really wanna get more opinions on this, would love it if you guys could share your thoughts and which one you prefer since you are the readers, and your feedback matters a lot!
P.S. there are no right or wrong answers HAHA, thanks a ton guys <3
Comments
stephattyy
Thank you so much SaikΓ΄ <3 Yus starting from April I am determined to prioritise this art thing more, i cant wait to dive deeper. U R TRU QUEEN.
SaikΓ΄
Everyone here has said what I tough so imma just tell you to keep going, you work so hard, give yourself some credits ! π You got this QUEEN ! β¨
stephattyy
Ohh, youβre right! I kinda didnt see it that way. I think the general consensus so far is that the revised version is easier on the eyes and sets the tone well, but it washes out the characters instead, so i suppose Iβll have to find a way to retain that moodiness from the revised without sacrificing the appeal of the characters in the process! Thanks for sharing your thoughts Cluis! Appreciate it π₯°
Cluis
The first version looks a bit warmer than the revised one. That was the first thought that I had. But apart from that, both look absolutely gorgeous. π₯° And with the more warmth that is presented in the 1st version, personaly I think it makes the customer more intimidating on the 2nd page because it underlines her beauty better. If you know what I mean? Those are just my thoughts. π
