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Webcomic Storyboard #182
🕑 Added 2019-06-22 02:25:38 +0000 UTCRough sketch storyboard comic script of the next L&M update C:
I got a little bit of pickle with this one, keep editing the story....I originally just plan to give the roaches and pigeon 3 parts, but seem it needs more than that (If I want to give it a conclusion.)
While it's cool to have the fight scenes and all, it will drag the whole story for even longer parts..
(there's even a scene where I cut out that, pigeon summons a bunch of pigeon minions to counter Hiro's shadow clone jutsu...but then I was like...no...no...we don't need to go full naruto on this (and I ment the part where it drags for very very long XD)
This originally was going to be 2 parts, but if so, I would need to reveal Niu niu is going to be in the next part, which will lack the impact for that part, because you will already know the joke. (while waiting for it to reveal for 10 days) and the first part is mostly battle scenes it's already lacking in the comedy part... (though there is a little bit of it when Pigeon goes full Saitama on Hiro XD) but still~
so I end up with this version.
As always, the sketch lines can still be edited or changed during the working process C:
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Comments
Jin
Thank you Tom 8D yeah~it's an addition for the readers who knows the context of it XDD
JT Tom
The action pretty cool, and I think the dog at the end is good comedy. It brings in comedy from the past that we originally thought wasn't that important and made it fit in the scene pretty well.
