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Webcomic Storyboard #199
🕑 Added 2019-09-15 06:36:40 +0000 UTCRough sketch storyboard comic script of the next Kazakiri update C:
Ep03 is Hellion focused Episode~ I had a bit trouble of how should I introduce Elliot and Lithana in the fastest way with Limited panels in one chapter.
And this is actually a re-write version, the chapter I was going for was a scene of Seth and Sara at the police department asking for information, while the last scene is slightly different, a lot more goof than this.
But, I decided to scrap that out, since the next chapter would have Lithana and Elliot...and for only kazakiri readers, it might be confusing, with out knowing more about their relationship.
If it was me, I'd be like..."who they are? oh.. bro and sis? I don't really know their dynamic relations, so I can't really care.."
So with this chapter, I hope it would help knowing a little bit more about them, even for L&M readers too.
Hellion is their half brother, I mean....the horns kinda gives it out...XD
(The last part is them outside the police department, Elliot just bailed him out.)
As always, the sketch lines can still be edited or changed during the working process.
Comments
Jin
He would take Lithana home first, so she wouldn't have to see what he's about to do next.
Aceslayer51
love to see how elliot would react if it were him watching people bully lithana that way instead of hellion. if that were me i would have done worse than what hellion did to him cause lithana should NEVER BE PICKED ON LIKE THAT
Jin
I even have a more lighted version of the ending~ but doesn't seem to fit in with the whole vibe of the chapter, so I went with this one. And to be fair...he IS kind of a dead beat XD more of that on the next one.
JT Tom
Wow... This actually was a pretty emotional chapter. Now I kinda feel bad that he's getting kicked out. I used to think he was kind of a dead beat.
