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Isles Lagoon (Part 12)
🕑 Added 2023-08-14 16:09:29 +0000 UTC
Paz suggested leaving for a different diner, but Molly said to stay for PR reasons.
Asked Paz to use her dad's credit card to buy everyone a drink, which Paz agreed, considering it WOULD help out their reputation.
As for...did Paz jump the shark for pulling out her sword? Well, Pirina was aggressively walking towards Lithana while possessioning a weapon, with an unknown probability of what was going to happen. Paz was not going to take any chances to wait and see.
Molly gave her the task of not hurting anyone, and she did. (it was Octavia who hit her with a bottle)
Also asked to play along with the lie, so Pirina won't be taken away.
While that ended up working out, it could have gotten a few different ways of bad, so I changed the ending part for Molly, acknowledging that Paz did a good job. XD
(And the previous one felt really rushed...)
Comments
Jin
Hehe, thank you Mythkaz~owo I was thinking about how to make that part seem that Silas is very skeptical and immediately thought of the Simpson's scene XD
Mythkaz
That Simpsons reference got me XD Good job as always
Jin
They're mostly slightly different in wording or added /deleted a panel 😆 rarely I change it to complete different.
Comfy Cherry
huh, I never look at the sketch, 'cause spoilers, but I just scrolled past it and there's a different ending, wonder how many other changes I've missed.
