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Pushing Through the Limit Chapter 40: Final days in Konoha

🕑 Added 2024-08-09 04:58:58 +0000 UTC

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savitar

As long as everyone wakes up from their fantasy world for my sake. And not just the Jonin, the way each team sees the world is so disappointing. The Jonin should have broken that mentality, a clear example was Lee and his inability to realize that not all problems are overcome by charging forward. And Neji was the same.

SkulduggeryHaven

The Jonin will definitely have a wakeup call when I get to that chapter, Asuma especially. The way I see it, he's a little above average for a Jonin, but not by much. In a straight fight, he wasn't even able to take on Hidan (Who was toying with him) while having Shikamaru help him out. Thanks for the compliment, I'll do my best to make sure the rest of the story is just as entertaining.

savitar

How could I not enjoy such an incredible story? And if possible, beat up Asuma a little. Control the Kyubi? Does that moron think like that damn Madara? Let's see how happy he is to get his ass kicked by Naruto using only ninja skills and no Biju chakra. I will never understand why so many people praise him because for a jonin he is not that special and that is even though he is the son of one of the strongest kages in history.

SkulduggeryHaven

That's a really cool idea. There was this one chapter that I've got planned for later, but I could easily modify it to add the rest of the Jonin and have it act as both a training session and wake up call for both the Jonin and Genin. Thanks, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.

SkulduggeryHaven

At the current rate that I'm writing, I won't be able to post 2 chapters a week for PTL. Sorry, but I feel that if I tried to keep a pace like that, I'd burn myself out and end up with subpar writing. Both stories that I write balance each other out. Each one acts as a break for the other... if that makes sense.

SkulduggeryHaven

I'll admit that it might be a little convoluted having Naruto need to go to Kumo. One of the things I tried to show with Naruto's darkness is that it has autonomy and can actively choose when it wants to screw him over or when it wants to help him. If the situation was serious enough, like with Danzo or if he had to face Madara, his darkness would step to the side and not screw with Naruto's control, but outside of that his darkness is jealous of Naruto's position and hurt at being ignored and forgotten. It wants to get a little payback. Given time, Naruto could learn to either self actualize without Kumo's waterfall of truth, but currently that's the most direct path he's got to confronting it. One fun thing about sending Naruto to Kumo, though, is that he gets to interact with the Kumo characters. The timeskip is coming up soon, so there's not going to be a ton of chapters with Naruto in Kumo.

Hersh Jobanputra

I sort of concur. He does not need to go to Kumo to Self-Actualize but it is your story. My only request please update more often at least twice a week.

savitar

I think Asuma is jealous of Naruto. At thirteen he is already a Jonin and seems to be getting stronger. I honestly also think he can blame Naruto for Shikamaru not getting promoted. You know, I think you should do a training session with the Jonin to show that they are falling behind Thanks for the chapter

Zombie45

I will say though I think this trip to Kumo is a waste of time. Gerotora talks about stealing the 9tails chakra and therefore having to deal with its will, which is a "mass of hatred." In this situation where Kurama is giving you the power there is no need for overcoming one's own hate. By overcoming one's hate and then stealing the 9Tails charka, you get Kyuubi Chakra mode. But by being given the chakra by Kurama you get Kurama Chakra mode which is used by both Naruto and Minato, the latter of whom most definitely did not under go training to overcome his own hate. At the end of the day, it's your fic so it's your call, but this is just convoluted in my opinion.

SkulduggeryHaven

Thanks, I just thought about how Danzo would like to be remembered and went in the complete opposite direction.

Zombie45

Danzo’s death is attributed to the best thing ever. My stomach hurts from laughing at this point.


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