E Valentine's Short [5.3k]
🕑 Added 2024-06-16 18:26:29 +0000 UTCE's short is here! And it's 5.3k words! This one is short for a few reasons.
1) I tried doing the usual "angst angst hint about route" deal but I realized even beating around the bush might be too spoilery for E's route. It was just too glaring every time I tried lolol
2) E is also more underdeveloped compared to the ROs and I want to let that unravel slowly in the demo so consider this the equivalent of dipping your toes in a pool to check the temperature hahahah I hope you enjoy it anyway <3 As always, I'm all ears for errors and/or typos!
Comments
Dani
Amy, you have a gift for creating such vibrant characters!!! I am once again falling in love with someone new. Some lines I noticed errors for: and he's always been clear about her feelings but there's never been a real conversation between you two. Eliott knocks on your door the moment you step back, and 2you give yourself one last look before you head out. Nudge him. "How are so smooth?"
janeydove
Though it was very fluffy, the "youre ruining my plans" part makes me think that MC just really attracts super complicated people. At this point i wont be surprised if E betrays us HAHA. Thanks for another valentines short it was great as always!
Tweedle Dee
You toy that line of angst plus happy valentines plans real well. I don't know what Es thing is but it is a perfect segway into ruining their plans, making me think they are the epitome of right person wrong time, and what a trope to be in. If it's the wrong time for MC or E then how does it end?! These sub romances are going for the throat. Amazing as always!
bea
sorrows sorrows prayers (to myself)
Sadie
And I thought Dakota was the enigma RO...OK E, I SEE YOU. E's always been a bit off my radar so far but now they're firmly ON IT. Infamous is gonna be the first IF where I romance the entire damn cast.
Klos
My money is on e working for a tmz style news outlet to do an undercover expose on the show.
notionals
SO. CUTE. AHHHHHH another RO to the roster my emotions are going to be everywhere
Amy
hehe
Amy
LMSHSHSHSH basically MC with every RO: *fire everywhere* "this is fine"
Amy
it was so hard not writing angst every line I was like "what have I become who is this new Amy" lmaoadhdhbs
Amy
hehehe
Amy
GOOD LUCK WITH THAT LMAO
Amy
LOL
Amy
👁️👁️
Amy
lolololol
Amy
Thanks for the catch! <3
bea
"Has the universe finally become kind to you? Or is this simply the calm before the storm?" (chuckles) I'm in danger
Ashleigh
E: *waving a thousand red flags and warning signs* Me/MC: that sign can't stop me because i can't read
junie
“you’re ruining my plans. you weren’t supposed to ruin my plans.” WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH
bea
it's official I'm romancing EVERYONE
mercy newbury
i love e 😭😭 this valentines special felt so nice and wholesome then the ending… WHAT IS E HIDING WHAT IS THEIR DEAL I NEED TO KNOWWWWwwww
Clark
*sigh* adds new romance route to the list
Jules
anyways i'm now very suspicious of E. that will not stop me from flirting though bc i want my mc's love life to be as messy as possible💯
Ash
i know it probably wasn’t intentional and totally irrelevant, but the fact that the picture in the car mc puts their head on e’s shoulder just like seven put theirs on avina’s shoulders on that one picture made me go 👁️👁️
precious
Small pronoun mistake I found for male E. "Eliott is kind—so much kinder than what you're used to—and he's always been clear about her feelings but there's never been a real conversation between you two." This is on the first page I believe
Jules
ruining E's plans??? what is up their sleeve....is this why they keep popping up at opportune times....much to think about
Amy
LMAO so eerie right....🤭
MaoTheGreat
that little moment when E suddenly stops smiling and says mc is ruining their plans was a little chilling ngl😭
Amy
lolololol
Amy
hahaha yeah! I'm not used to the sweetness either tbh! But it was a nice change to flex my "fluff" muscles lol
Georgia Young
👀👀👀 I’m watching you, “Mr/Miss. Keller.” If that is your true name…….
Eden
I dont know much about E yet so finding out more about them in this short was really fun! They are a bit too sweet for me right now, but definitely a nice breather between the more angsty romances, so Im excited to see more of them in game^^
Amy
Ahhh thank you! They were really fun. I should do more prompt stuff like this haha
sunday
Congrats on finishing the Valentine’s shorts!