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Author's Note: April (2024)

🕑 Added 2024-03-31 23:44:18 +0000 UTC

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ILikeBirds

Phew! I have to say those changes you made to the recent chapter of "A Hero's Blessing" on Archive are really good! I especially enjoyed the interactions Bianca had with Zoe near the end of the chapter; it really helped to flesh out the gentler side of Zoe along with Bianca's motivation to jump under Talos Jr. That scene, in my opinion, also helped make the transition to the conversation with Alcides feel a lot more natural. Lastly, the two breaks in the chapter from Talos Jr.'s (or would it be Talos Senior's) point of view were really exciting, considering what they foreshadowed. Keep up the fantastic writing!


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