Interest level for idea
🕑 Added 2023-04-24 14:27:15 +0000 UTCSo I truly started my writing adventure with my story, 'My Upgrades are invincible' Due to a number issues like it being my first story and myself having zero idea how to write, it had a great number of issues with the story itself to say nothing of the grammar and other issues. That and for whatever reason a lot of other online novel sites stole the story and reposted it under their name and you can literally buy it in Turkish on Amazon lol
Anyway I was thinking about rewriting it and wanted to get your guys opinion on it as I have grown a lot as a writer since then.
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Azazyel
Yeah it was my first serious fic so it had a lot of issues
Zerak
I actually avoided reading your stories for a good while after giving your first DanMachi story a try since it felt hella rushed.
kiddeath1998
Love that story definitely need to rewrite. Cant wait๐ค๐ค
Azazyel
Yeah Fusui is pretty good but tbh I would do an expy Hinata Hyuga for laughs
Deathknight134
That's fair. But for the "more tame" thing, was mainly pointing to Kengan as Baki is insane. Kengan is slightly more believable with their Selective breeding for a race of humans meant for combat in the Kure. Speaking of, which girl do you like the most in Kengan? I prescribe to the Church of Fusui, lol. (Raian's little sister, sniper girl)
Azazyel
I would like to do a fic focusing on Alchemy at some point
Azazyel
Doulou 1 or 2 others aren't as good... I don't need mechs in my cultivation fic lol. But it was an idea if I was to use a OC/SI who would have the Avatar elemental bending powers but other powerset could work.
Azazyel
"Tame" for universe's where people punch earthquakes into silence and being so good at martial arts can let you live to be a 150 and still be able to punch through boulders... That's just Baki, in Kengan people can remove their body limits, hypnosis, and other crazy stuff
Gilgamos
Douluo dalu 1/2/3/4? or a battle through the heavens fanfic?
Azazyel
Yeah I loved it alot as I literally wrote a 170 plus chapters for it lol
Ikito100
Alright on another note i'm excited for the rewrite
Ikito100
Yesssssss
Deathknight134
Your Kengan/Baki idea..is the cheat the Water Stream Rock Smashing fist and the Whirlwind Iron Cutting fist martial arts? XD Or something more tame?
Jironimo Ross
rewrite, main reason I am actually subscribing. it had a lot of good things.
Azazyel
Like I said the story had a lot of issues, like the whole reality marble bit for his world traveling nonsense. But yeah I was thinking more on the rewrite and instead have the MC be part of the Familia whose goddess has the best ass... That's right Hephaestus and her leather clad booty
Azazyel
Perhaps. I will think about it.
Ikito100
Well how about travelling to a other universe after finishing the last airbender
Vulkizaro Zoromi
That was such a great story. Only OGs know how much of a thrill that was. Please rewrite. Or even better, continue it.
Azazyel
Huh... Like taking the elemental manipulation into Doulou Dalu or Battle Through the Heavens would be cool and I could spin it as some kind of innate body or something. But honestly the avatar world itself is kinda boring as the story is very focused on Aang being a hobo and running around
Ikito100
Cultivation from battle through the heavens like the Warhammer fic or douluo dalu with the god of the elements or things like that for the last airbender
Azazyel
Oh my b lol... Uhhh I haven't had any Last Airbender fic ideas honestly. If someone had an idea we could work something out but I got no spark of inspiration for it
Ikito100
I don't mean the tall blue people
Azazyel
So I am hoping with a reboot it would bring some interest to it
Azazyel
Yeah gotta remember that I write almost entirely on commission, like right now I got literally like 15 chapters of stuff thats already paid for that I gotta write. Well out of the 170 something Upgrades chapters only 9 of them were commissioned.
Azazyel
Ehh was only a niche thing I had after just seeing Avatar 2. If anything would do the Kengan/Baki idea I had. Just good old beating the crap out of one another with a ninety's vibe going on
Azazyel
It didn't really sell and the couple of people who bought it made a stink in the reviews about it being incomplete lol
Nicholas Castiglione
Rewrite or just continue it, it's honestly the reason a found you and your stories and a personal favourite of mine. Kind of depressed there's been no updates for it for so long.
Ikito100
How about and avatar the last airbender fanfic
Jesse
Kinda a Rick move that they stole it can you make them take it down?