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Road Trip 10

🕑 Added 2021-04-11 09:08:44 +0000 UTC

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Dirk Grey

Appreciated, fixed.

Konan2020

somehow both too quick and too fast Should this part be, too slow and too fast? too quick and too fast is the samething

Dirk Grey

Thanks. Much appreciated. I think it has two advantages. One, it's happening in a restricted area, hence more focused on characters than events. Two, it's a recent one, hence it includes the lessons I learned from the mistakes I made on my other stories :)

Porksword

I think this story has your best writing


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