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Blacksmith vs. the System 150

🕑 Added 2024-11-16 21:54:29 +0000 UTC

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Undead Writer

Two chapter 150s!!

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!

Temp Email

But it’s not without limits since Harold isn’t affected as much and both Maria and Eleanor were able to see past it. It was clearly a miscalculation on MC’s part to not consider the effect of levelling on the guards. He’s been ignoring the issue of the guards’ bias and wasn’t making too much effort to resolve it so this was always going to happen. It was just a question of when

musashi

There are certain kinds of things a story should not do if the author wants to build trust with readers. One of them is mind control without limits. Possession (demonic) destroys trust because the MC (and others) personality is rendered meaningless. In this case the System itself is playing the role of the demon. It will be interesting to see if the author can recover trust.

musashi

I have to agree with Joseph. They may be called guards but their function is that of a soldier. You don't get to walk off the job when your task is to protect people. Especially when those people feed you. The guards are abandoning their duty and that _must_ come with a penalty.

Chawki89

What would you have done. Imprisonment or death? They are employees. Let them leave.

Josh

To each their own! I like where this is going but everyone got different tastes

Josh

I think its a display of integrity to not compromise his moral standpoint

Andrew B

I have to disagree with some of the criticisms- I really enjoyed the fact that he had to make a snap decision between his morals and expediency; it highlights that the MC is a human being, and the fact he acknowledges that his actions have consequences will make the ensuing fallout much more impactful. I’m not a fan of consequence free power creep, and the fact this story actually dives into social and personal impacts of growing stronger in a more real world setting is a fascinating juxtaposition to me of the typical shonen archetype.

Joseph

That was both a truly incredibly poor decision and publicly showed him as a complete doormat undercutting him with even the people who stayed. Who is going to follow or respect a doormat and a weakling?

Randall Klatt

Awesome! Thanks for the chapter!

EsZeus

Ps. Can't answer anymore if someone comments here, because sub will end tomorrow it seems. Thanks anyway and wish you the best, as I said.

EsZeus

Dumb MC. Thanks for the journey so far. But this is now a point for me to leave. MC is not handling that well at all. This could have been a lot smarter. And he just left them be with all he gave them. For free. With all his secrets possibly being out there with them now, way too soon. And so much more failure in the MCs thinking process. So far I didn't like or couldn't follow some decisions here and there, but it was fine for me. But sadly this is nothing I will follow along in a story anymore. Thanks for the nice story so far :) wish you all the best!

Dan Chadwick

Thank you


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