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(Memento Mori) Chapter 62: Step One, Make Them Aware Of You

🕑 Added 2019-08-27 05:41:34 +0000 UTC

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Azurus Icewind

no problem! It's why I'm here. That and to enjoy content

It took some time, but finally fixed! I still need to go further back and correct anything else, but its a start. Thanks a lot for the help!

Azurus Icewind

"The last was too inhale as deeply as I could." "too" needs to be replaced with "to" "When raised myself up, I felt as light as a feather. " "when I raised myself up", or, "when raising myself up." “I was to eager,” "to" should be "too" here "I stepped outside and shifted in a crow," shifted "into" a crow. Otherwise that sounds way messier than it is.


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