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(Guardian Of Nature) Chapter 4: Breaking Free

🕑 Added 2019-08-28 07:43:17 +0000 UTC

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I did have some worries over introducing them so soon, so I'll definitely keep the pacing in mind. I've planned out a great deal of it, I just need to think about how it's delivered. Thanks for the comment, it helps!

I like this much more because it is more about him and a intelegant animale than a reincarnated person. Please keep up the good work!

Rene Christensen

Not sure I like this version as much as the old one, the whole tribal thing felt much less developed. Basically just something that happened for no particular reason - i dont think a new reader would really understand why that part is here. There is also some pacing issues, feels a little rush thereas the old version had some buildup.


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