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New Story - Pre-Edit Teaser
🕑 Added 2022-06-23 14:58:23 +0000 UTCHi all!
Just to celebrate being halfway through the build up of this new story - and because it will be so long - I have decided to share the first five pages of the story with you all.
This is all pre-editing, and pre-finishing the story. So things may change as time goes on but for now this is how the first five pages look. I hope you enjoy and that it whets your appetite for the story as a whole!
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The Wedding Guests
By The_Shadow_Rising
Quiet clouds lazily drifted across the sky as late afternoon began to turn to night time in the City of Taboo Dreams. Warmth permeated the air and filled the residents of the City with a playfulness that only sparked hotter with the twinkling of the neon lights flashing on in places.
Shorehaven was alive and about to go out to play. And everyone knew it. People were getting ready to head out for the night, whether to a bar, a nightclub, or to their friends’ places. Fun was on the agenda, and so was a lot of sex. Beautiful girlfriends headed out, ready to kneel in front of their boyfriend’s best friends when something happened, eager to take their cocks into their mouths. Desperate to swallow cum.
Hot wives leaned over tables and counter tops so that their husband’s bosses could plough them wildly from behind. Naughty fiancées looked at their engagement rings as they were fucked into their beds by their fiancé’s rivals. And sexy mothers, sisters, and daughters cried out into the night as pleasure overtook them as they had sex with their sons, brothers, and fathers.
Shorehaven was where dreams came true, and the sexier those dreams were the better. In one house in Gainborough the warmth was gentle yet persistent, and one person’s dreams were about to become a reality. For that person, their night was about to become wonderful and their future bright. Little did they know what they would unleash by the power of their own dreams becoming a reality.
In that house Noah Young was sitting on the edge of his sofa, eagerly watching the game of baseball on the television. He was enrapt by it. He couldn’t look away even if his sexy girlfriend of three years walked in naked! Which she wouldn’t do as she wasn’t there at the moment. But still, the point stood.
The only thing Noah really paid attention to other than the game was his best friend, Logan Reid, sitting next to him and just as eagerly chanting on the opposite team. He couldn’t not pay attention to his friend when Logan was shouting out loud and almost jumping up and down in his seat. He got very vocal when it came to baseball.
But Noah was content. At least for now he was. He had nothing else to think about except the fun night ahead and the great game on the television. That was when Logan spoke.
“Looks like you’re going to lose this one, Noah. The game’s almost finished and your team is down. Ready for the walk of shame?” The tall, brown-haired man said.
“It ain’t over yet, my man. We’ve still got a chance.” Noah replied confidently. “All we need is a couple more home runs and we’re golden.”
“Well you won’t get them. That’s just wishing for great things. Be realistic.” Logan responded jovially, already thinking he had won.
“Oh yeah? You sound pretty confident. Got something riding on the game, have we?” Noah laughed.
“As a matter of fact, yes. I put a hundred down for the Soarers to win and they’re going to kick ass. Just look at how they’ve performed already!” Logan replied good-humouredly.
Noah looked away from the television long enough to gaze at his friend, who smiled at him smugly.
“You put a hundred on this game?” Noah asked disbelievingly.
“Yeah, makes the game that much more fun to watch when you’ve got something riding on it.” Logan answered amusedly, “There’s nothing like the adrenaline of knowing you’re going to win big as well as watch your favourite team come out on top.”
For a moment, Noah looked at his friend. He hadn’t thought Logan was the gambling type. He certainly wasn’t. But he did wonder just what that feeling was like if Logan said it was exhilarating. Maybe he was onto something.
“Yeah, well I’m not stupid enough to lose my money on a game.” Noah said prudently.
“You’re just scared. Live a little. Come on, I’ll bet with you now if you’re so confident that your team can make a comeback this late in the game.” Logan jeered playfully.
Noah thought about his chances and how he didn’t like to gamble. The game was almost done and the chances of his team winning were a bit remote. But still, something in him wanted to show his friend how wrong he was. Something wanted to believe in his team and to take a chance.
But if he lost money to Logan, who may be his best friend but Ashlei, Noah’s long-term girlfriend, didn’t like him very much, he was sure to get into trouble. So he wracked his brain in the few seconds his friend smirked at him, thinking he’d won.
That look was almost unbearable, and so was the smugness radiating off his friend as if the game was already done with. That irked at Noah and he wanted to do something to wipe the smile off his friend’s face. That was when a brilliant idea came to the dark-haired boyfriend of three years. He did believe in his team, and they could win. He just had to have faith. The game wasn’t over yet, and his team was the better team overall.
The idea that came to him was so refreshingly beautiful that Noah almost laughed. He did grin broadly all of a sudden and Logan eyed him curiously.
“What’s up with you?” Logan asked confidently.
“You’re that confident that you’ll win?” Noah asked secretively.
“Yeah. This one’s already in the bag.” His best friend answered surely.
“Then I tell you what, I’ll make a bet with you.” Noah said assertively, feeling the rush of gambling suddenly pulse through him and the thrill of hoping that his team would come back and win. “If you’re not too scared?”
“Scared? Of you? Bring it on, boy.” Logan replied amusedly.
“Ok. If my team loses I will clean your house and car for a month.” Noah said with certainty.
“And if you win? However unlikely that is.” Logan responded sarcastically.
“If I win then you have to go to this wedding with Ashlei instead of me.” Noah continued on.
“What?” Logan asked confusedly.
“There is this wedding coming up next week that Ashlei and I have to go to. We haven’t RSVPed yet but we can’t really get out of it and neither of us wants to go. So if I win you will go instead of me and I get to kick back and relax. Then you can deal with Ash being in a bad mood all day.” Noah replied simply.
For a moment Logan looked at Noah dumbfounded. Then he spoke up.
“But Ash doesn’t even like me.” He said as if stating the obvious.
“She’ll get over it. It’ll just be another irritation in her day of being there. She doesn’t want to go either.” Noah said as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, “I’ll RSVP straight away tonight if you lose and then she’ll have no choice but to go with you. She’ll be fine. She might just be a little sulky is all. She really doesn’t want to go. But we can’t really get out of it. At least one of us should have a good day, don’t you think?”
Logan seemed to mull that over for a second. Glancing at the television he looked back at Noah.
“But I don’t want to go either. Weddings aren’t my thing, unless I’m nailing a bridesmaid. And Ash doesn’t like me as is, she’ll be a nightmare to be around.” He said defensively.
“That’s what you get if you lose. I thought you were confident you’d win?” Noah asked feeling a little giddy from the gambling. He wasn’t used to this and he felt right proud of himself having come up with this idea.
He was confident his team could win, and that meant not going to that stupid wedding! He couldn’t wait!
Prodding Logan’s ego like that made Noah’s best friend puff up like a proud cockerel.
“You think I’m not!? We’re creaming your ass. Ok, deal. If I win you clean my house and car for a month and if you win I go to this stupid wedding with Ash.” Logan agreed and Noah grinned.
“Deal.” He said, and his giddiness only seemed to double as if the world had suddenly changed around him.
Something seemed to happen anyway, as no sooner had the words left his mouth than his team hit a home run. Jumping off the chair with a cheer, Noah sat back down glued to the television.
“Lucky hit.” Logan said confidently, but his confidence quickly lessened as Noah’s team hit another, and then another home run as their batters stepped up to the plate.
It was like watching something heavenly, Noah thought. Everything seemed to go right for him and soon the game was ending and Noah’s team were up by more than they had been down before the bet had been made. And they had won.
Noah jumped up from his seat with a shout of pleasure.
“YES!” He yelled, “In your face!” He added to his down-trodden friend.
Logan just sat there with both a surprised look on his face and a look of loss. He had never seen a comeback like it. It was a freak thing and he was sure that the team would have lost if they hadn’t made that stupid bet! Now he had lost a hundred as well as having committed to going to this wedding with his best friend’s girlfriend.
“Yeah, yeah.” He said disheartened.
“This is what you get for not believing!” Noah exclaimed happily. More so when he realised what this meant qua the bet: he wouldn’t have to go to that stupid wedding anymore! “I guess this means you’ll need a new suit.” He laughed, and Logan looked up at him with a hang dog look.
Sighing Logan leaned back on the sofa.
“Great. Just perfect.” He said despondently.
“I’m going to RSVP right now!” Noah announced as he moved over to where the computer was by the wall, “And I better phone the hotel and change the room booking. This is great!”
Doing just that Noah jumped onto the computer and opened his email while Logan watched on with a lost look in his eyes. Noah typed a few words and then opened up the wedding invitation and clicked ‘reply’.
“Yes, we will be attending.” He muttered pleasantly as he clicked the ‘Affirm attendance’ button. “You will be, anyway. I won’t be.” He said half to himself and half to his friend.
Logan just slumped a little more in his chair. Ashlei was not going to like this. She was going to be a nightmare to be around. Oh, there were good things to being around her – she was hot as hell, for one – but she didn’t like Logan at all, and everything Logan did seemed to grate on her nerves. She would be staring daggers at him the whole time!
Comments
I hope you will all like it! I'm really looking forward to seeing what you all think.
Fergus Rauf
I’m sure we’ll all love it Shadow! If you’re passionate and excited about it then it’s going to be very good. I can’t wait to read it, especially the build up.
Sounds like an interesting story. Would like to read it
Fergus Rauf
You make a very good point My Love is Your Love and I hadn’t considered that element. It would be interesting to read a story where the dynamic shifts wildly in the couple’s relationship during the build up which acts as a catalyst for her doing someone she hates or her BF’s rival etc.
All good thoughts. Not sure what you'll think of the new story but I hope you all like it. I'm enjoying the build up to this story so I hope you do too.
My Love Is Your Love
Me too ! It would be a first for this type of heated relationship (outside of the Sophie Serie) !
My Love Is Your Love
I love Crying Wolf too, it actually was the first story from Shadow that I read. And it's one of my favorite just because she despised Rhys so as you said it added some taboo and conflict, it was perfect and today it still is (unfortunately) pretty uncommon for Shadow's stories (outside of Sophie's stories, I can't think of other examples, even if it was tease in other stories). But I think that having the GF being mad about her boyfriend from the start takes away some of this tension because it gives her a "good" reason to cheat, so she's less unattainable. If I didn't read the first lines of a Crying Wolf that show that Elizabeth hated Rhys, I'm pretty sure I would have skip the story with just the summary of Literotica (thank God I ended up reading it !). Still, since the buildup of the new story seems pretty big, I take it she will not fall for him from the start (I just hope she'll know from the start that they did a bet and she will not learn it 50 pages later and then decide to sleep with him lol). In any case, very excited to read this new story as always !
Thank you! I am glad you enjoy Crying Wolf and those kinds. I am hoping you will all like the new story. Should be fun. I'm enjoying it at least :D
Fergus Rauf
I respectfully disagree re revenge plots. When done correctly such as ‘Crying Wolf’, they’re an art form and electric. I find cheating stories based on natural attraction formulaic and predictable. However, cheating with someone you despise is exciting due to the conflict and taboo nature. Furthermore, from reading Crying Wolf, I can tell it’s much tougher to achieve a believable revenge story which doesn’t stray into the realms of cuckholdom, and a story that achieves this is insanely exciting and clearly brings up a lot of opportunity for sexually charged dialogue and taboo scenarios. So although like you, I love all of Shadow’s work (he truly is ahead in his class), I am personally very excited to read this new story and hope to read more similar ones from him in the future.
Thank you. We'll see what you think of it when it's done.
I'm glad you liked the setting. I hope you will like the story.
I'm glad you like it! I can't wait to share the whole thing with you all!
Also not a huge fan of revenge plot either. Really hoping our female main character just genuinely gives in/falls for her boyfriend's friend instead. But also agree that Shadow will make it work great regardless :)
My Love Is Your Love
Wow, I was expecting to follow the bride, but I like this setting too ! Especially since she doesn't like her future lover (for now :)) !!! I just hope she will not hold the bet against her boyfriend too much, not a huge fan of revenge plot (even if I love all your stories !). Hopefully we will see more as you write ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Shando Fenindra
This is very promising - thanks for sharing! I also like the subtle addition of Shorehaven lore, as it puts an added dimension into earlier works. You've got this!
Thank you! :) I will be releasing the full intro of ten pages, which introduces Ashlei, when the story is submitted. Hoping that will fire your minds even more.
Wow, my imagination is already running wild with this teaser. Thank you for this! Great start for things to unfold from here
Thank you. I like this build up. And I have some fun ideas for the sex scene and things she will do/say.
Awesome! I love your build ups, the longer the better. Continued success in the writing, and I appreciate you putting this teaser out.
Glad you liked it. It's a long build up so it starts with her boyfriend and his best friend, but she's in it from the moment she's introduced. I will post the first ten pages when the story is submitted and that introduces Ashlei. The build up is fun.
Great start, can't wait for the Ashlei details and for her to join the scene. This is going to be an excellent story.
