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WIP update #3

🕑 Added 2021-07-01 16:17:21 +0000 UTC
WIP update #3
WIP update #3
WIP update #3
WIP update #3
WIP update #3

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Melvin Velvet

Ahaha yeah lmao god, I didn't notice how visible that broken leg is. That's actually just lazy posing on my part, it's not visible in the final shot. My weird ass half-unguligrade legs do work, I promise! Just, you have to be careful when posing them. Make the skirt longer? Blasphemy. Heresy!

pomegranate horsie

Nice, sounds like you have a great workflow going for fluids. I like the twitching motion you have for the cumshot. I figure this is probably because it’s just a blocking demo, but during the cumshot it looks like the penis is just rotating along the base. It might look better with a (very subtle) little bit of translation as well to help emphasize that, and the head and cavernosum could swell up a bit too in time with the pulses. For the second photo of twilight where she’s sitting on the ground, her leg looks really bad at that angle. I assume it’s due to putting ungulate legs on a human torso with normal thighs and upper legs, not really a way to make that look normal no matter what you do. Maybe smooth out the point at the start of the curve on the left. (If you wanted to get tricky about it, you could make the skirt just a little bit longer and try to raise the camera a bit to hide it).


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