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Little Acres page 22 (SCRIPT EDITED)
🕑 Added 2020-03-14 14:40:46 +0000 UTCHappy Saturday! Hope you're all doing well and staying safe~
EDIT NOTES: was mulling this page over with my wife and decided to reword it a bit. Sorry for any confusion! Feel free to share your thoughts, I love feedback!
Comments
I think it's the placement. Text bubble 3 is attached to text bubble 2, which makes it seems like Gwen is saying both bubbles.
<3 <3 <3
“My wife” you’re gonna make me cry ily
is it the word balloon placement? I can try to fix that
I do find the text on this page a little difficult to follow
