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Chapter 37 - Duel

🕑 Added 2025-01-22 21:44:51 +0000 UTC

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musashi

tftc

Marko

Hmm, you're right, I'll need to polish that up a bit. My thought process when writing it was that Rowan wasn't trying to show off to the rest of the adventurers but to the mage advisor, and holding eight spells at once is impressive enough to accomplish that.

Thaabit Rivertree

It feels like Rowan was making suboptimal choices just to show off. I think the adventurers should be able to recognize someone who can plan well, execute well, and fight well, versus someone who shows off flashy skills but jeopardizes their win because of it. The flame bolt should have been more useful than just adding more and more burning whips, imo. Also, the duel conditions werent explained properly. I thought they were fighting to defeat the other by incapacitating then or forcing a surrender, not to what "would have been a lethal hit". That shouldve been explained beforehand. Changes the stakes and expectations from a duel where youre trying to win but not kill (by incapacitating) vs a duel where a hit that oherwise would have been lethal, but isnt, stops the match.


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