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Chapter 53 - Alarm

🕑 Added 2025-02-08 12:54:26 +0000 UTC

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VoidAutarch

Btw it's litwick and not tumbleton correct?

Marko

I'm glad you're liking it, and thanks for the support!

suspicious

Only thing I'm disappointed with is that there aren't any more chapters. Really enjoyable read so far, thanks!

Stephen Pearson

Great chapter, thanks! :-)

Marko

I get your point, but the only other option he had in this situation was to teleport away and leave all the adventurers to die, something he isn't willing to do. I've gotten this a few times already so I think I'll need to work over some earlier chapters to clarify that what he's giving out isn't really all that great in the grand scheme of things. Litwick is a weak settlement in the weakest region, and Rowan has the combined riches of one of the wealthiest houses in the kingdom at his disposal. A few epic trinkets don't even put a dent in it. There's a much bigger world out there, and Rowan's only unlocked the second door in the Vault. Still, I appreciate the feedback! Definitely something to keep in mind once I'm re-editing.

Bookworm bibliophile

I don't know but it feels like the plot is over relaying a lot in Rowan using/providing expansive stuff without earning anything. Beside maybe in your story Epic is not that uncommon but I don't know it is kinda hard to accept him giving out Rare/epic weapons left and right. There is huge focus on mc identity,wealth and not the exciting part like his adventure and growth.


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