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Chapter 37: Satan Spreads His Wings

🕑 Added 2025-05-13 22:50:54 +0000 UTC

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Ce-Nex

So, you've hit the nail right on the head. It is asinine. Valend is deluded in thinking that his descent from the original Eligos qualifies him for any sort of highground. He's essentially a nepo baby with no ability or competence. One thing I want to clarify though is that I primarily write charcaters from the 3rd person limited perspective. Thus, there's an inherent character bias within the narration on the prose. An unreliable narrator, essentially. These views are Valend's personal views. The descendents of the original Satans, the leaders of the Old Satan Faction? Yeah, they only care about getting their thrones back. Because, like all Devils and Demons, it ultimately comes down to having power. As for racisim, well, yes. They have an inherent, supernatural sense of contempt for all other life. They're progammed to hate and be vile. In DxD canon, Rizvem feeds his son's inferiority complex and convinces him to abuse his own son, Rizvem's grandson. All because he found it amusing. This is a society of sociopaths and narcissists. They don't see or interpret things the way a human 'rational' mind would. It's an alien mindset. That being said, I'm very confused. Where are getting the notion that Demons were fashioned out of the souls sent to Hell? I never wrote that. I also never wrote that Lucifer wanted to rule in Heaven. Lucifer's motives were entirely different in DMAW. Are you sure you're not conflating my story with a different one?

George Wright

I'm making this comment before even finishing reading the chapter because I cannot help but read Valend Eligos first rant in Draco Malfoy's voice... The rhetoric is straight up Harry Potter pure blood WIZARD through and through, I can't tell whether or not you did this on purpose I can't tell whether or not this is actually true to the source material ( original DXD I mean) on top of the fact that this is racism in hell for all intents and purposes, HELL, I'm sorry but where do devils get off feeling superior when they are essentially living in the armpits of the cosmos, HELL like I get the notion that devils were cruel and they took pleasure out of the pain and suffering they inflicted on their victims ( which just to be clear, that pleasure was taken out of a sense of spite because all demons yearn for heaven but they know they will be denied so instead they choose to go the other route, and make sure everybody else suffers in hell with them instead) but their arrogance out of a sense of superiority is just asinine, I do not understand demons weren't arrogant because they were superior, demons were arrogant because they knew whatever you did to them you couldn't ever kill them because they just end up in hell, their arrogance came from a sense of imperviousness knowing you could never punish them and you could never take your revenge on them for whatever slight stay inflicted upon you now, I can understand that the newer generation are more human like so OK but the Old Faction supposedly ascribed to the mentality of the original incarnation of demons from hell originally created by Lucifer to fight the armies of heaven and therefore the notion of them being arrogant over some sense of superiority just makes no sense, if anything they should feel arrogant out of a sense of serving their master punishing those their master fought against, I don't understand ( and if you think that maybe the demons should feel superior over the angels they defeat because they are a lower being capable of defeating a higher being... well then they would be punished by Lucifer himself since Lucifer hated the demons, he never cared for them, he never loved, them he knew they were essentially the trash of the underworld, call them demons devils whatever, they are the unliked, unloved, unwanted bastard children of the universe and they always were, arrogance and vanity and superiority makes no sense) the entire concept is that if Lucifer could not serve in heaven than he decided to rule in hell... but between you, me and him he'd much rather rule in heaven, the demons were literal tools he artificially fashiond out of the poor souls sent to hell I'm just so confused

Ironwolfej

One of the things I enjoy with this story is how you do such a good job making it clear why everyone else has issues with the Devils. They are so unnatural, and almost all the other supernaturals can feel it.


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