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Pexia's Guide to Omeria - Introduction + Chapters 1 and 2

🕑 Added 2021-04-12 15:10:03 +0000 UTC

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Just in case your proofers miss it: page 10 under Titan Worship. There appears to be not only a redundant word but also an extra word in the sentence: "The Steel Churchians actively pursue those a little more "looser" with their powers, such as and Braar'enaath, Ereyth, and T'qin." I don't know that you need to add the word more and I'm not sure that and belongs. At the top of the third paragraph in that section, you probably want to add an "s" to the word titan in your naming of Omeria's titans.

Incredible lore drop here, making me more and more excited for the kickstarter!


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