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Kartoon Warz #4 update
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One thing I would like to discuss is about the graphical violence for this story. In the last panel of this batch you can see a character receiving a really hard punch. I had three choices:
-Making it very gruesome, teeth and blood flying from the mouth.
-Making a very deformed and funny face, eyes popping out like a tom and jerry cartoon
-Or making them moan and sweat a lot, still keeping the faces beautiful and sexy.
I chose the third and a bit of the second. Of course, it loses a lot of impact, but I can use the 1st choice for some key moments. What do you think of all this?
Comments
ReddyHeart
Agree, it fits the theme after all.
ReddyHeart
Yeah, you are right, some cosmetic damage like a bloody nose or some thin blood drips on the corner of the mouths is alright.
Niccab
I think your current choice is good enough. In my opinion, you don't need to make it overly gruesome, though a bloody nose every now and then can help convey the idea of damage being done. As for spelling/grammar mistakes, there's only one I could find: "I spent 8 hours in a beauty salon yesterday..."
Joey Fernandez
Cartoons can withstand incredible damage, lose some teeth, break some bones, and still be fine in the next shot. I say keep it cartoony/sexy regardless of the violence.
