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Chapter 56: The Man Beneath the Thing
🕑 Added 2025-08-24 14:04:32 +0000 UTCJay took a deep breath, feeling the weight of every stare in the room. Time to rip the band-aid off completely.
"You want to know how my powers work? Fine." He gestured to the room full of temporarily depowered heroes. "I can permanently absorb abilities from others, but I ain't some black hole. It’s not infinite—I can only hold so much. I’ve gotta choose what I take cause once I take something, it ain't going back."
The silence stretched uncomfortably. Ben remained stone-faced—well, as much as his partially rocky features allowed while his powers flickered under Jay's suppression.
"I wanted to help Ben get back to normal," Jay continued, his voice steady but tired. "But getting what I needed required a roundabout approach. I couldn't just walk up and ask to absorb his powers and turn into the Thing myself—Ben would've told me to go pound sand. So I had to get enhanced first, upgrade my absorption range and control, then use what I learned to give him what he actually needs."
Then Sue exploded.
"Why didn't you just TELL us?" Her voice cracked with hurt and fury, her hands clenched into fists. "We were friends! Heck, we were family, Jay!"
The past tense in her words hit him like a gut punch. Any favorable light he'd held in their eyes was gone, snuffed out like Johnny's flames. The realization settled in his chest like a lead weight.
"I'm sorry," he said quietly. "I can't explain myself in a way that'll make this right. But I can still deliver on my promise."
Jay moved toward Ben, whose partially rocky form tensed like a coiled spring.
"Stay back, Ya think I’m some charity case? Forget about it, pal," Ben growled, his Brooklyn accent thicker than usual as his mutation fluctuated. When Jay didn't stop, Ben awkwardly swatted at his approaching arm, his movements clumsy without full access to his strength. "I don't need no pity favors from a backstabber."
Jay flinched at the word, but pressed on. "Sorry, Ben. I can't respect that."
"What?" Ben's orange eyes blazed with indignation.
"I can't let your pride stand between you and having a real life. Not when things are going so good with Alicia."
Ben's rocky exterior actually cracked with rage. "Keep her name outta your mouth, you two-faced—"
"What about when you two want to get married? When you want to have kids? Ben, you gotta see—"
"I said shut up!" Ben lunged forward with surprising speed despite his weakened state.
But Jay was already moving. In one fluid motion, he caught Ben's head in both hands before the big guy could connect. Reed started forward instinctively, but Sue grabbed his arm—whatever anger she felt toward Jay, she wasn't about to stop him from helping Ben.
"Easy, big guy," Jay said softly. "This isn’t going to hurt."
The moment Jay's enhanced power made contact, he went deeper than simple suppression. Using his combination of upgraded absorption and Sage's borrowed genetic perception, he reached into the cosmic radiation-twisted DNA itself. But instead of stealing Ben's transformation ability, he did something far more complex—he rewired the genetic triggers, installing biological switches that would let Ben control his changes at will.
It was like performing surgery on the building blocks of life itself.
The change started slowly, then accelerated. Ben's rocky exterior first cracked or crumbled, and then it just... faded. Like watching special effects in reverse, the orange stone dissolved away to reveal human flesh underneath. Normal proportions returned, the hulking frame shrinking down to that of a regular—if impressively built—man.
For the first time in nearly a year, Benjamin J. Grimm stood in the room as just Ben. Regular, flesh-and-blood Ben.
He stared down at his hands in absolute shock.
"Holy..." His voice was different too—still gravelly from years of cigars and Brooklyn attitude, but human. Completely human. "My hands. They're... Jesus, they're normal."
And then the tough guy from Yancy Street—the man who'd faced cosmic storms and gamma monsters without flinching—completely fell apart.
Ben dropped to his knees like his strings had been cut, sobbing with the kind of raw emotion that made everyone in the room take an involuntary step back. Everything hit him at once: Jay's betrayal, the curse being lifted, the intensity of recent battles, Jay nearly dying, and now this impossible gift he'd dreamed about for months.
"I can feel things," he whispered through his tears, flexing his normal fingers over and over. "Actually feel things. Not just pressure and heat, but... texture and temperature and..."
His voice cracked completely.
The Fantastic Four immediately surrounded their friend. Reed and Sue dropped to their knees beside him while Johnny hovered nearby, his own eyes suspiciously bright. Even angry as they were at Jay, they couldn't help but be moved by Ben's breakdown.
"Ben," Sue whispered, taking one of his normal hands in both of hers. Her voice was thick with emotion. "Oh, Ben..."
Hank's analytical mind was racing, but his voice held pure wonder instead of scientific observations. "The cellular restructuring is perfect. My word! Complete genetic reversion with voluntary activation protocols. It should be impossible, but the quantum-level modifications are seamless."
Jay swayed slightly, the complex genetic manipulation having drained him more than expected. His power suppression field flickered and died, allowing everyone's abilities to slowly trickle back online.
"Like I promised," Jay said quietly. "You can change back anytime you want now, Ben. Thing form for clobberin’ time, human form for everything else. Your choice, always your choice."
Through his tears, Ben looked up at Jay with an expression that was equal parts gratitude and betrayal—like he couldn't decide whether to thank him or punch him.
"I don't get you, kid." Ben's voice was hoarse from crying. "I don't understand you at all. You lie to us, you trick us, you make us think you're gonna die... and then you give me the one thing I wanted most in the whole freakin' world."
Ben wiped his eyes with the back of a normal, flesh-and-blood hand.
"So what am I supposed to do with that, huh? How am I supposed to feel about you now?"
Jay had no answer. He just watched Ben flex his fingers while surrounded by his chosen family, and figured that was enough. Some gifts came with prices that couldn't be calculated.
Bobby moved to Jay's side, steadying him as exhaustion caught up. "You did good, kid," the old vet murmured.
The room fell into contemplative silence, heroes slowly testing their returning abilities while processing what they'd witnessed. Jay had given Ben something beyond price—not just humanity, but choice.
Comments
Gemaxter
Doing the right thing, even if it hurts.
Manan Biwal
No he did appear dead on medical Setups as his soul was pulled to the Queen of Nevers
Martateniop
« You make us think you’re gonna Die » I don't understand, do they think he pretended to almost die?
