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Chapter 85: The Happiest Timeline

🕑 Added 2025-09-16 09:25:00 +0000 UTC

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Manan Biwal

Thanks for the encouragement, buddy!!

Gemaxter

Idk about you Strike, but you often make me tear up with these onion cutting ninjas. It was truly well done, the only improvement "I" could ask of you is to keep doing whatever it is you're doing because its working for me! 😭👍

Manan Biwal

Thanks 🙏 but it's not a mistake at Jay's part, just a single decision that changed everything just like we sometimes think back to few key decisions we took and wonder 'What if we had taken the other choice that day?'

dalantigua

The way I genuinely felt heartbroken that the MC Jay is effectively cutoff from that happy timeline due to his own mistakes is amazing. You have an awesome ability to inject real feeling and empathy into your writing that I don’t see a lot. I hope you’ll keep writing more and that you enjoy it while you’re doing it.


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