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Chapter 240: Floatin’ Around At The Speed of Sound

🕑 Added 2023-10-21 14:11:27 +0000 UTC

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Conor McGroarty

Bet carrying a dragon is good exp for thrusters.

A P

Could void have used his energy to bring the other dragon to level 50. I'm still not sure how the mechanics of that work. Was it only possible because Daedalus was strong enough to withstand it.

BigBro Bluesman

Thank God someone put it into words..

tonright

It's super weird that we skipped the first person actually talking to archibald. felt like ages have been spent building up to that and it just... didn't happen? edit: not a bad chapter it just feels like maybe it was meant to be 240 instead with another chapter before it? or 238 was meant to be a little longer?

Philipp Battenberg

I agree that skipping the first meeting of Bee and Archibald is quite jarring. And Spot's return should be a long way off. Daedalus started his return a few days before Void (at least four? Two days searching for the Lieutenant, IIRC, plus two to three days carrying the dragon). And Daedalus is significantly faster than Spot, so Daedalus should arrive at least five days before Spot. I seriously doubt Daedalus needs five days (more likely half of one) to burn down the enemy army, unless they have a Lieutenant.

Zeruke

This chapter felt like we missed a whole chapter in between. Where did this sudden relationship between Bee and Archibald come from (they hadn't actually met yet in the previous chapter). Why are we days ahead of where we were before and with very little understanding of what was happening in the interim (outside of "there was a battle and these people were crucial")? Why is Bee willing to just trust this man whom the only thing she knows about him is he fought the Demons and was apparently on the side of humanity. This whole chapter just feels completely disjointed from the prior chapter. The Void section was fine and made perfect sense, but i really feel like the Bee section is being rushed to try and make a better timing with Void meeting back up, and it feels like important story beats are being skipped to achieve that.

BigBro Bluesman

This fuckin Roomba has the riz of a god holy shit

Captdeth

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