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Willie and Kat, still the same
🕑 Added 2024-01-15 15:25:48 +0000 UTCHere are some more updated pages. The changes are still pretty small, because I'm not looking to change the style of the comic. Even though Kat and Willie both look pretty different from their current appearance in the story, Annie is the one I felt needed most work in the early pages. The new volume is close to finished, and I’m looking forward to showing more in the coming weeks and months!
Comments
Koda
I love the rounder shapes, but I kinda miss the death glare of the lower left panel :D
Renee - EnsembleofWolves
Looks great! :D
will davison
Thanks, Tom!
Brian Harvey
There was some argument about the boldface when Tom posted the first redone sample. But on this page I'm perfectly happy to see "study hall" in lightface. :)
Quasitling
Odd that the original images of William in the last panel of the first page and the 2nd panel of the 2nd page look almost identical, yet you only modified the latter, not the former.
Carl Fink
I'm actually curious about the lettering. Removing all the emphasis--is that meant to let the reader invent our own "sound" for the dialogue?
sjlxndr
Agreed
Calvin Lebowski
Very agreeable changes!
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