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Taming a Dragon- Part 5

🕑 Added 2024-09-18 23:30:08 +0000 UTC

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Maniac000

Just caught up with this story. Lol I’m curious what Harry did to make the Faceless Men back off. He send back the head of their assassin with a note?

MN01

Also, for the Gryffindor Sword, this is (since Gryffindor was likely an Saxon or Anglo-Saxon since he lived in the late 10th-early 11th century) what should be on his sword. Not written in modernized English. Found this interesting runes translator and this is (since Gryffindor was likely an Saxon or Anglo-Saxon since he lived in the late 10th-early 11th century) what should be on his sword. Not written in modernized English. ᚷᚩᛞᚱᛁᚳ ᚷᚱᛁᚠᚠᛁᚾᛞᚩᚱ I found this recently as I was discussing how Gryffindor's sword shouldn't be designed like they show in the movies. And there was a far better and more historically accurate to the time period it was made (late 10th century) sword they could have used. And you could even keep the rubies on the sword without it being unrealistic due to some swords having such things in them during this time period and could even have the names of their owners or family inscribed on them (though it wouldn't be in English but the Old English used by the Anglo-Saxons until it would be displaced in the late 11th century after the Norman Conquest) Here is the type of Sword I would use for the Sword of Gryffindor, a Carolingian sword that was the precursor to Knightly Swords seen in the later 11th century. The sword used for the example is a recreation of the Saxon sword found at Sutton Hoo in the 1940’s. https://images-ext-1.discordapp.net/external/RWguZhmbUzEIyRfFZgCvBsW4L8nmmIyeCKXfoZy31Ec/%3F_cchid%3D29cee24bf46c6a34e68945485dc5a79d/https/www.castlekeep.co.uk/uploads/img-7497.JPG?format=webp&width=448&height=671 https://images-ext-1.discordapp.net/external/mx7RSxU0_ltHKvLtYtJ51fjCFwg2jBqjMlnA0dHuYTI/https/www.castlekeep.co.uk/uploads/img-7499.JPG?format=webp&width=853&height=671 https://images-ext-1.discordapp.net/external/sshKidxH9M5ZORJoUXfe__nEED75sXGVAA1PE40RDLA/https/www.castlekeep.co.uk/uploads/img-7505.JPG?format=webp&width=1006&height=671 https://images-ext-1.discordapp.net/external/OVrIiNWJ9vJiL5MpyYOO-vi7XkN-4QyrOsunpz1vsdc/https/www.castlekeep.co.uk/uploads/img-7493.JPG?format=webp&width=1007&height=671

MN01

Your welcome. One suggestion I would make in regards to defenses of his islands it to have not only wards but animated armors and statues as well that activate to attack if ill intent is detected by the protections. Hell, you could use those to help replace men that could be more useful elsewhere as those things don't need food or sleep. Another suggestion I have is for the final look of the Bloodstone Castle and the seat of Harry's power. If I had to go with a look. I'd go with the look of Castle Caladan from Dune.

W.D. O'Neill

Thanks for the correction, I'll be sure to make that change.

MN01

One tiny nitpick, the model isn't King's Landing. Its a recreation of Old Valyria using historical texts that Viserys was known for studying. Also that interaction with Cole was something I wish writers would use more often. One fate I can think of that would probably put the fear of punishment into law-breakers in Harry's Kingdom isn't death (Most have probably faced that through one form or another in their daily lives enough to have become mostly resigned to it by now) but being sentenced to live out the rest of your existence as animal, fully aware of yourself at first but slowly lose yourself over the course of months or years until you fully devolve into the beast you've become would be terrifying.

Erinnyes

Foot play isn't my favorite, but the chapter was a ton of fun regardless. I'm really enjoying the relationship building.

Bobby Wyatt

I really like this story and can’t wait to see where it goes. Thank you

John McCormick

This is definitely one of my favorites, but the one I look for the most from you.


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