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Following Orders

🕑 Added 2024-10-10 03:05:28 +0000 UTC

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Nova Sana

I really enjoyed that the POV was from Amelia’s perspective rather than Harry’s and that she dictated the story beats. I think this was a refreshing approach and it was well executed. Just because you struggled with it does not mean a poor result. Far from it! Thank you for writing this!

Elias

excellent

W.D. O'Neill

Thanks, always appreciate it.

Erinnyes

Solid one shot, Amelia and Harry is an underused paring and I think you did a great job with them.

W.D. O'Neill

I'm very aware that it's paid content. And I always keep that in mind, which is the reason why I always ensure that I update here at least twice as often as I do on other sites. Ideally it would be more than that, and early on it was, but unforeseen circumstances have made that more difficult at times.

OkHere

My issue isnt with your content, i actually do enjoy it. But damn is it unsatisfying to read. Especially if you happen to love fanfic enough to pay

OkHere

You dont update often enough so thats the issue. And this is paid content

W.D. O'Neill

I mean this with all due respect. If you're regularly not enjoying what I'm writing, I recommend that you simply cancel your membership. I try to provide the best experience I can manage, and I know that there are times where I succeed in that endeavor better than others. If you feel like my work is subpar, and you'd rather not support it any longer, you really shouldn't be wasting money on it. I'll freely admit, like any writer, I have moments where certain stories and ideas are more complete and complex in their construction than others, and not every story comes as easily to me as another, but I always try to ensure that they are both enjoyable and 'coherent', as you put it. I do the polls, to provide variety away from the ongoing stories. If that's something that readers don't enjoy, or would prefer to be tweaked, I'm happy to have that conversation, but I've never had any complaints about it. Regardless, I appreciate the feedback, and I hope, if you decide to continue your membership, that you enjoy the next release.

W.D. O'Neill

Thanks, I appreciate it.

J.Rogue

I liked it, I couldn’t even tell that you struggled with it 👍

OkHere

This update isnt worth paying for

OkHere

STOP CHARGING MONEY FOR YOUR INCOHERENT IDEAS

OkHere

Id rather you’d update your already unfinished fics

OkHere

I feel like what you post, i Have to read. Bcuz im paying. Some fics are worth it, and some aren’t. You hardly even try imo. And yes, im PAYING FOR this


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