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MiP B2 Chapter 5: Introductions

🕑 Added 2024-04-30 20:10:50 +0000 UTC

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Irony

Sounds like that’s up next!

Irony

It’s absolutely terrifying that they can break in and kidnap two nobles without even a trace at all. Or maybe there was a trace and it’s just been too long + he’s a lower level Looks like our troublemaker is actually a super diligent person, and wants to do the best job he can. I wonder if he was really good at school and was just bored with how easy it was? Oh and he got a bunch of nice academy books by order of the grown, that’ll be way more helpful than I assumed. I bet that book of incantations and patterns would be ridiculously helpful to Carlos and Amber I never throw away my textbooks, and I’m an adult. What if I end up needing them to spontaneously write python or c++ That conversation definitely knocked the mayor down a peg or two Oh lifelong loyalty to house Carlos? Damn. I mean it makes sense, since it sounds like it’s a feudal system. But I for some reason thought this was a temp job Love that Carlos actually cares about his team and them getting to get acquainte. Rather than some lords that treat staff like objects Ooh sounds like Trinlen is meeting Purple! Super excited to see how much he freaks out

Jambles

I'm just here to selfishly bemoan your personal struggles, because I've got a fever, and the only prescription is more chapters.

viperfan7

Uggghhhh I REALLY wanted to see his reaction to purple.

Paweł P

Thanks for the chapter! [joke] less thanks for the cliffhanger. [/joke] seriously. I cannot wait for the next one.

Riley, Glutton of All the Foods

Thank you for the chapter! Glad to see you back! Keep up the great work! Purple meeting Trinlen... and vice versa... this could turn out to be fun. I'm excited to learn more about the magic system alongside Carlos and Amber. Trinlen-sensei, please impart your magical wisdom unto me!

Carl Mason

Unless his name is Mallern Plaskin, I don't honestly remember anymore.

BigBro Bluesman

I'm just gonna say this would make a great anime

BigBro Bluesman

This is going to blow his mind!

Connor Mcharg

Trinlen referring to Carlos and Amber so casually is going to throw off the scion of House Golarn in their investigation, isn’t it? Also, I hope Purple can cope with the meteor storm of questions that I’m sure are about to come from Trinlen.

Beeees!

Trinlen has no idea whats coming and i am very excited for next week0

Beeees!

I feel like thats a great indication of a fleshed out character. When they help you write themselves

Colt Parris

Thank you foe the chapter! I like seeing trinlen and how he is trying to take things seriously

Douglas Miller

I really wasn't planning to have Trinlen react like that, but when I got to that line it just sprang out at me how appropriate it would be.

Elain C. Moria

There is one thing wrong with this chapter. And it's a fatal flaw. There is no NEXT button (huffs in annoyance).

harkange 585

Another good chapter and god it's not suprising that trinlen liks Sconter's style

George

Trinlen continues to impress with his deductions. He's an excellent match for them as a teacher, in so many ways. Headmaster Plaskin, huh? Well that confirms that old man Mallern, royal academy receptionist and janitor, wasn't secretly the headmaster. I guess we'll be left to wonder exactly what qualifies him to be the 'wise old mentor who does whatever he wants' at the academy.

Person

Yay! This story definitely needs more Purple.

Dan Chadwick

Time to meet Purple. Prepare to get your mind blown!

13L00D13ANE

Trinlen is gonna lose his mind upon meeting purple. Cant wait!

Justin Drake

TYFTC

blaze87b

Your 'next' button is broken

Chris Brown

Meeting Purple is going to knock that smirk off Trinlen's face - at least for a minute or two!


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