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🕑 Added 2025-03-16 20:45:49 +0000 UTCAnd here's page 17 with a .zip file with the clean panels including an unused one.
Sometimes showing how characters move coming close to each other just drags the action down and you must cut that movement. If you do it right the action flows and remains visually understandable.
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Soul Noir
Ok, excellent hand placement. 10/10 no notes.
Briaeros
I needed a shorter speech, I should have looked up the exact original phrase as "emotional shock" sounds way better.
claybear
Oh this is how I imagined the scene in Robocop if Robocop were a woman where he says Madame you have suffered an emotional shock. I will notify a rape crisis center.
Jen
Oooo, I love the unwanted bare breasted nervous hug