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Picture Perfect 5 - Draft
🕑 Added 2024-11-18 11:03:52 +0000 UTCSo, the poll was less helpful than I'd hoped, managing to be more or less neck and neck since I put it up. Probably should have seen that coming!
What I'm going to take from it so far is that there's enough of you who don't want to have things spoilt by a rough version of things, but also plenty who'd like to give feedback which could be valuable in helping me tweak at things. So we'll see how this works as a compromise. Below is a link to the published version of the googledoc I'm working directly from - with a near finished Chapter 5. *Do not click it if you want to wait for a more final version*
But if you do want to take a look, I'm looking for opinions on how well the turn at the end of the chapter has been seeded, particularly over Chapters 4 and 5, or whether the way it's presented now doesn't quite work for you as a reader. All other comments are still super welcome, but it's the ending and the flow of Riley's feelings I'm particularly keen to stick the landing on.
