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Queen in the Mud: Book 2, Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2021-09-18 01:58:24 +0000 UTC

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Empo

I love this world building, as I've said before, but you crancked it up here I think. In a good way. My only worry here is that you might be moving a little too fast with how we've just entered the city and make the revelation of intent in the same chapter. BUT this is simply me being a worry wart. Because I can't find any fault with the pace in how I read the chapter. It flows together wonderfully, while at the same time, the descriptions of the architecture are both filling and satisfying to read about.

Narasan

Yes! I love it! Cant wait for more!


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